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mechanical matter that can be parceled out to students by computer programs. The crux of the matters seems to be that teachers, as they have always been, will still be the backbone of our school education, while computer is simply a useful tool to improve students’ understanding of the subject matter.
（四）、升华法
思路：一个话题讨论结束后，切换到与此相关的另一话题或另一个角度，实现升华。
模板: 0
To be sure, … will bring about profound changes in… 0
Indeed, …. are something we can not afford to ignore 0
However, one thing is certain: (从句)
题目 1：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
结构：
引言段：明确观点，指出使用手机的缺点远大于其优点
主体段 1：让步承认使用手机的一些优点，如方便、功能齐全
主体段 2：分别从社会、医学和技术发展方面阐述手机带来的不足之处
结尾段范文 1：In conclusion, I tend to believe that the downside of using mobiles phones far exceeds its merits. Indeed, it various drawbacks are something we cannot afford to ignore because they have produced many adverse effects on people’s daily lives.
题目 2：International tourism is now the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it brings ??
tension rather that understanding between the people from different cultures. Do what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
结构： 引言段：明确观点－国际旅游会造成许多矛盾和误解 主体段 1：列举了三种文化差
异所产生的紧张氛围
??主体段 2：阐述了国际旅游可能产生的旅游者与当地居民的矛盾
结尾段范文 2：In conclusion, the cultural gap that exists between
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international tourists and their foreign destinations creates more tension that understanding during their travels. However, one thing is certain: international tourism will continue to enjoy a boom time and send a growing number of travelers to many exotic places around the world.
注意事项：
1. 画蛇添足：文章写完了,发现字数不够,就随便加上几句.而这几句恰好游离于文章的中心思 想之外,或与其观点恰好相反. 如： 一篇关于阐述考试作弊危害性的文章.
But sometimes it is understandable that students cheat on exams under heavy academic pressures. 2. 空喊口号:
0 Do it now! Do it from ourselves! Let’s make our city greener!
0 No electricity, no power, no world, no future, no human beings! 3. 表决心：
I’m determined to overcome any difficulties and study English better in the future. 4. 虎头蛇尾： 0 So I think that making our city greener is very important. 0 Therefore, no electricity should be wasted.