我想知道你是否能来......
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it. 我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to... 我很荣幸的邀请你......
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗?
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 下午,我们会一起......
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师。我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。 8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗?
3. We will feel much honored if you could come. 如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming. 我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon. 我期待着尽早见到你。 续写评分标准 第五档 (21-25分)
与所给短文融合度高,与所提供的各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意思表达。 有效地使用了词语间的连接成分,所续写短文结构紧凑。 第四档 (16-20分)
与所给短文融合度较高,与所提供的各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 内容比较丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但不影响意思表达。 比较有效地使用了词语间的连接成分,所续写短文结构紧凑。 第三档 (11-15分)
与所给短文关系较为密切,与所提供的各段落开头语有一定程度衔接。 写出了若干有关内容,应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求,虽有一些错误,但不影响意思表达。 应用简单的句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 第二档 (6-10分)
与所给短文关系有一定关系,与所提供的各段落开头语有一定程度衔接。 写出了一些有关内容,应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
语法结构单调,词汇项目有限,有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意思的表达。
较少使用句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。 第一档 (1-5分)
与所给短文和开头语衔接较差。
产出内容太少,很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。
语法结构单调,词汇项目很有限,有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意思的表达。
缺乏句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。
0分 白卷,内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。 读后续写题目(2017、11、3) 第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?!
Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as asnice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 解题思路 1.核心内容解读:
本文主要讲了一个健忘的妈妈的事。
第一段:我的童年很有趣,大部分是因为我的母亲。 她很可爱,有趣,同时也很迷糊,健忘(absent-minded and forgetful)。