(3) Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. =Some of the…are poisonous and dangerous to health。
污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。
(4) Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet。
环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。
(5) …Under considerable pressure from… therefore…will only add to their burden。
在这样的压力之下，所以会增加他们的负担。
(6) I see three kinds of pressure working on people today: pressure from education, family and career. It is easy to blame the school for charging too much money, the family members for the heavy burden, the society for the fierce competition. I think people should relax. It is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances。
我能看到今天人们身上的三种压力，教育的压力，家庭和职业的压力。学校所收学费太贵，家庭成员负担过重，来自社会的激烈竞争。我认为人们应该放松，他们他们来说，在任何环境下保持一个好的情绪是很重要的。
(7) Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their
character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness。
而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。
4. 合作角度
(1) sth can give students team-spirit and teach them how to cooperate with others. Because in those activities, students usually need to cooperate with others in order to get good achievement。
Sth 可以赋予学生们团队精神，并教会他们学会与人合作。因为在这些活动中，学生通常需要相互合作目的是得到提高。
5. 科技发展环境角度
(1) In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past。
在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。
(2) Admittedly, this limit has made it possible for the public to realize the importance of environmental protection and enable we Chinese people to cherish the beauty of
our communities.
可以承认，这一限制已经使得公众认识到环境保护的重要性，并且使得我们中国人去珍惜我们美丽的社区。
(3) Although many people claim that, along with the rapid economic development, the number of people who use bicycle is decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I‘ve collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society。
虽然很多人承认，随着经济的快速发展，使用自行车的人数正在下降，自行车一定会消失。根据我最近几年所收集到的信息使我相信自行车会在现代社会中扮演一个非常重要的角色。
6. 成长成功
(1) Most people are under the illusion that a college degree guarantees success. There is no such guarantee without hard work。
许多人错误地认为大学学位能保证成功。不努力工作就没有这样的保证。
(2) While the inclination to procrastinate is common, one must fully consider the detrimental impact of unnecessary delays。
虽然拖延的倾向是普遍的，但是人们应该充分考虑到不必要的延误造成的有害影响。
(3) The tendency to take things for granted is understandable, but the need for one to rationally evaluate the circumstances of any situation is absolutely essential。 想当然的倾向是可以理解的，但是，理智地估计任何情形的情况是完全必需的。
(4) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents' desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages。
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长(微博)想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的，但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。
(5) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school。
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。因此，放学后强迫孩子额外学习是不明智的。(结论句式)
(6) While achieving success is easier said than done, persistence does in fact pay off. One of the most important traits of a successful person is self-confidence, another is desire, and still another is determination。
获得成功说起来比做起来容易，然而坚持不懈确实会有好结果。成功人士的最重要的特征之一是自信，第二是渴望，还有一个是决心。
(7) Independence offers many advantages, the first and foremost of which is self-determination。
独立带来很多好处，首先也是最重要的是自决 。
(8) There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness?
近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢?
(9) Most people are of the opinion that wealth provides solutions to all problems. But in spite of the material benefits wealth provides , I believe one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness。
大多数人认为财富为所有问题提供解决的办法。但是，我认为，尽管财富提供物质上的利益，一个人应该放弃物质至上的追求，而是集中精力追求幸福。
7. 社会宏观
(1) China needs to reexamine the results of economic and social modernization in order to ascertain the benefits and indeed(表示加强含义) the detrimental aspects from a new perspective. Otherwise, various perceived accomplishments might in fact prove to be far from beneficial 。
中国需要重新检查经济和社会现代化带来的结果以便从新的角度明确它们的好处，甚至是有害的方面。否则，许多我们以为取得的成就实际上可能完全不会带来好处。
(2) We must avoid overindulgence and conspicuous consumption . We must instead continue to recognize the benefits of thrift in order to protect our newfound prosperity。
我们必须避免过分放纵和铺张浪费。相反，我们应该继续发扬节俭的优点以守护我们新获得的繁荣。
(3) Many of the explanations offered thus far are at least to a certain extent valid, but none fully address the problem and the issue must be examined in a wider context。
目前提供的许多解释至少在一定程度上是正确的，但是，没有一个解释能完全处理问题，这件事情必须放在更广阔的背景中考(微博)虑。
(4) There is little doubt that immediate action is required to eliminate the detrimental aspects of drunk driving once and forever。
毫无疑问，必须立即采取行动彻底消除酒后驾车的危害 。
(5) Some months ago , a friend of mine was killed in a tragic automobile accident involving a drunk driver . The incident was far from rare , and was in fact typical of thousands of cases involving drunk driving
几个月前，我的一个朋友死于一场与酒后驾车有关的悲惨车祸。这件事情一点儿也不罕见，事实上是数以千计的酒后驾车案例的典型之一。
(6) It is high time we put an end to the deplorable practice of food contamination 。 我们早该杜绝食品污染这种应遭谴责的做法。
(7) The most striking conclusion that can be reached when weighing the advantages and disadvantages of the market economy is quite frankly prosperity。 很坦率地说，在权衡市场经济的利弊时能得出的最显著的结论是繁荣。
(8) The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future。
提出的充分证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论：艾滋病的祸害在可预见的将来就能得到控制。
2012.6英语六级考前6天冲刺:写作过关三步骤
目涉及的现象进行简单的描述，在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题（这样的描述可以自己控制，如果第一段落字数单薄，可以适当使描述具体化）。
作文的展开—按照三步走：
1）题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述，在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题（这样的描述可以自己控制，如果第一段落字数单薄，可以适当使描述具体化）。
2）在第一步的基础上给出观点，观点视文章主旨可以分为：个人观点（包括方法、途径），和多方观点（观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述；在交待观点是需要有原因和支持）。
3）个人观点总结点题（同意异表），简要指出方法途径，如果找不到具体的解决方法，则将话讲得圆滑（如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突，则可以融合）。
A My view on the negative effects of some advertisements
社会上的广告现象越来越多，很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-〉（广告如何多：路边大型广告，报纸一半是广告，电线杆上垃圾广告，电视商业广告频繁。）
Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much of newspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. However pervasive they are, （尽管他们四处充斥）they always produce a negative influence.
从观点的多个层次描写：1. 白日抢劫——卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买（化妆品）；2. 种下不良消费习惯或者价值观（香烟）；3. 污染环境（牛皮癣和校园商业海报）。
To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence （白日抢劫每天都在发生）as a result of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and
distort/ignore the facts.（夸大功能，歪曲事实） Every means is tried to hook people into buying（为了诱导人们消费，不择手段）. Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.（化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子） Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind （在脑海中植下）of consumers, especially young people, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further than cigarette selling. （香烟销售就是一个典型的例子）Ads with the image of a smoking pop star broadcast an irresistible message.（传递无法抗拒的信息） Last but not least, easily-printed posters and handouts have polluted our environment
个人认为广告负面效应不可避免，要通过严格的法律来减少危害，同时开动脑精，远离它们。
Personally, no one can avoid the negative influence. However, we need to step up law enforcement （加强执法）to minimize the harm of such ads. Meanwhile, as consumers, we need to use our head and keep our distance.
B Two-day weekend
--〉工作效率提高，物质生活富足，人们可能享受2天周末制，—〉（除了工作效率之外：人们对生活水平的期待。）
As the productivity improves, our society becomes more affluent than ever before. As a result of such social advance, a 2-day weekend seems not just possible but also feasible.
从正反两方面描写，每个方面可以从多个角度来论述：1.有人欢呼，原因如下：1）更长的休息时间，更好的调整精力，更高的效率为新的一周做好准备；2）更长的时间与家人分享，更加融洽家庭关系；3）可以进行适当距离的旅游，更好的享受生活。2.有人反对，原因如下：1）在某种程度上不利于生产和生活（减少产出，办事不方便）；2）降低效率（周末未完之事必须拖拉两天；周末活动过多造成假期疲劳）。
The proponents （支持者）happily welcome a 2-day weekend for the following reasons. Firstly, a 2-day weekend ensures more time for rest（确保足够的时间休息）. People can better recover from 5 days hard work（可以更好的从天的工作中恢复过来） and get more refreshed and productive for the coming week. Secondly, a 2-day weekend allows more time to share with one‘s family. Thirdly, 2 days make possible（使—成为可能） short-distance travels, so that people needn‘t rush through a destination （在一个游玩的目的地走马观花）and can enjoy more of life（更好的享受生活）. On the other hand, the opponents（反对者）argue an extended weekend（延长了的周末） causes
incontinences of some kind （某种程度的不便）to life and harm to economy, as workers in service agencies （服务行业）and in companies leave position for leisure and
recreation.（离职去娱乐享受） What‘s more, a longer weekend reduces efficiency（降低效率） and does not necessarily promise （确保）more energy for a new week. Anything that happens on Friday but can‘t be finished within that day has to be delayed even
longer. After people finish an ambitious travel, they feel exhausted than refueled. （他们感到很疲劳而不是充电了）
个人认为是好事，但是要多方面努力，享受好处的同时尽量避免坏处。
As for me, I readily welcome the 2-day weekend. Still, we need to make joint efforts to minimize the disadvantages while enjoying a happier life. C Do lucky numbers really bring luck?
--〉中国这个社会长期以来的传统:喜欢吉祥的数字。数字和运气之间有必然的联系么？--〉（如何喜欢：重要事件选择黄道吉日，如婚庆，开业；手机号码选择吉祥数字等等举不胜举。）
It‘s a tradition in the Chinese culture to associate lucky numbers with good luck. We select good days for big events like wedding and business ceremonies; we cast huge money for a good phone number or a car plate. Similar examples simply abound in this country（这样的例子举不胜举）. However, does this magical relationship exist?
从正反两方面描写，每个方面可以从多个角度来论述：1.有人坚信，原因如下：1）几千年的民族传统肯定有他的道理； 2）偶尔的神奇现象也能增加信心。2 .不相信的人也有自己的理由：1）数字只是人类发明的符号，与运气无关。2）如果不遵守科学规律，任何数字都不能确保幸运（车祸）。
Those who believe argue that such a tradition dates back thousands of years（这个传统有几千年的历史了）. There must be a reason. In addition, occasional coincidences（偶尔的巧合） in history and in life even add to their confidence（增强了他们对这个信心）. By contrast, those who don‘t believe also have their reasons. For one thing, numbers are nothing but man-made symbols. How can they have anything to do with luck? For
another, however lucky the numbers are（不管这个数字都么的吉祥）, accidents can‘t be avoided if we turn a blind eye to science（无视科学）, say, driving a car while being drunk.
个人认为数字和运气没有必然联系，因此不能当真。同时尊重这样的一个传统。
From my point of view, there is never any relation between lucky numbers and good luck. While we keep this tradition, we should never take it too seriously.
2012.6英语六级考试写作七大原则