六级作文必看1(5)

2019-04-22 19:50

一、 长短句原则。

工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主题句原则。

国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成\群龙无首\之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly

三、 一二三原则。

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点... 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的\标签\来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) 8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、 短语优先原则。

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点-精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。 五、 多实少虚原则。

原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如: 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式原则。

1)加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友..。可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away..。

5)附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don‘t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句-借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑战极限原则

既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second

largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!

2011英语六级CET6写作中的套话III

方法三:用好―数据论证‖,学会没话找话

―数据论证‖这个方法像把双刃剑,一方面它很管用,写得好的话,能形成流畅的论证过程;而另一方面,它有点像―谎话‖,如果写不好,数据组织和延伸句之间不通顺,一看

就像编―故事‖,反而影响成绩。所以,建议经验较丰富的写作―高手‖使用该方法。考生在使用这一方法时,可以巧妙地把数据论证和延伸句结合成一个整体。比如,《新概念英语》第三册第九课中,L.G. Alexander就曾用数据论证的办法证明―猫有九条命,是摔不死的‖:

… they have nine lives. Apparently, there‘s a great deal of truth in this idea. A cat‘s ability to survive falls is based on fact. Recently, the New York Animal Center made a study of 132 cats over a period of five months. All these experience have one thing in common: they have fallen off high buildings, yet only eight of them died from shock or injuries.

划线部分的句子将研究机构名称、实验数字、实验期限三个要素串接在一起,插接在主题句―they have nine lives‖和延伸句―they have fallen off high buildings, yet only eight of them died from shock or injuries‖之间,形成了一个有效的铺垫。这种写法虽然有点―耗字数‖,但是对于写作时无话可说的考生来说,也不失为一个好的选择。

考生可以仿照上述文章的数据写作方法,采取―机构名称+调查数字+调查期限‖的写法写成句子,插接在主题句和延伸句之间。例如,考生可以将中间的铺垫句写成以下形式:

1. As can be seen in a recent survey by the China Daily, at least three out of every five interviewees believed that +延伸句

2. Recently the Beijing Youth made a study of 1,132 citizens for a period of two months. Despite their genders, occupations, religious background, social status and income levels, there is one thing in common: +延伸句

3. CCTV interviewed five people from five cities—they are from Harbin, Beijing, Tianjin, Shanghai and Shenzhen respectively. The survey showed that +延伸句, in spite of their birthplace, educational background and socio-economical status

2011英语六级CET6写作中的套话II

方法二:巧用结构,替换空话

诸如―with the development of our society‖这样的句子可能是中国考生最爱写的一类套话了。考生通常会把这类套话安排在主题句的前面,美其名曰―先交代时代背景,再引出主题句‖。这类套话还会衍生出无数―变种‖,比较夸张的写法是:―Along with the dramatic economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological

displacement, there‘s an urgent demand that our country have more newspapers and magazines.‖看过上千篇―范文‖的考官一眼就能看出―Along with the dramatic

economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological displacement, there‘s an urgent demand that‖是―凑字‖的空话。

那么该如何替换这一类空话呢?其中一个办法是使用―……很重要,我们要重视‖这样的句子形成主题句,然后对―……很重要,我们要重视‖这个意思进行结构变换或修辞处理,使用词和结构更加多样化。下面用语法结构解析的方法来逐一分析―……很重要,我们要重视‖的表达方式。

1. 用―主―系―表‖结构表达。―主―系―表‖结构是英语写作中最为基础的结构,它的基本结构是―名词+be (变形)+形容词‖。在用该结构替换上文所述空洞无物的套话时,可以使用―not only +形容词, but also +形容词‖结构,比如写成:―… is not only necessary, but also indispensable‖,然后后面再补充一句:―and that‘s why we are supposed to emphasize its central position in our society.‖这样就能成功将―随着社会

的发展‖这一空话替换下来。

2. 用―主―谓―宾‖结构表达。上文中的句子还可以这样表达:―… plays a

significant part in our society, so it is essential that its position be emphasized.‖细心的考生可以发现,虽然是表达同一个意思,但―主―系―表‖结构和―主―谓―宾‖结构采用了不同的句子形式,这两种表达方式都直接、有效。

3. 用否定句和被动语态表达。否定句和被动语态结合起来使用能使表达更加多样,也更具客观性,如:―The central position of … cannot be ignored. So we are expected to underscore its importance in our society.‖

4. 用until正话反说或反话正说。可以用―… has been overlooked until recently. But …‖这一句型来为―……很重要,我们要重视‖这个意思做铺垫,从而使句意表达更加生动,比如:―The importance of … has been in large measure overlooked until recently. But nowadays, it is not only necessary, but also indispensable in our society. ‖

5. 将―重视‖和―重要‖的顺序颠倒,先写―重视‖,再写―重要‖。比如:―We are supposed to emphasize its central position in our society, because it is not only necessary, but also indispensable.‖ 2011英语六级CET6写作中的套话I

想写这篇文章,是因为在评改作文的时候,笔者总是看到一些考生在文章的开头使用―It goes without saying that …‖或―There‘s no denying the fact that …‖等套话。还有一些考生使用更长、更复杂的套话,比如,仿照《独立宣言》的首句,写成:―We hold these truth to be self-evident that …‖或者仿照简·奥斯丁在小说《傲慢与偏见》中的写法,写成:―It is a truth universally acknowledged that …‖笔者经常想,这种只占字数、不表达思想的句子在作文中出现,考官会怎么看?他们会觉得考生的写作水平高吗?考生当然也很无奈:要完成一篇250~300个词的英文文章,如果不写这些套话,要写够字数,还不能写得太简单,那都写什么呀?

看来,问题不在于该不该写这些套话,而在于如果不写套话,那么考生该用什么来取代它们,以使作文简练、流畅而不装腔作势。下面笔者列出几种套话写作的处理方法,和大家共享。

方法一:宁写一词、不写一句

这种方法主要用于替换引言套句。具体的办法是将主题句前面的―It goes without saying that …‖―There‘s no denying the fact that…‖等引言套句换成一个副词,直接引出主题句。比如,考生写一篇关于―互联网‖的文章,一般都会习惯性地用引言套句引出主题句,写成:―It goes without saying that the Internet has offered people a way to communicate.‖(句子1)还有些担心字数不够的考生甚至把上述句子扩充为:―I‘m quite certain that a growing of number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that the Internet has offered people a way to communicate.‖坦率地讲,在最初用英文写作时,笔者也经常用这样的句子,而且每次用心中都会感到一种巨大的―成就感‖。但你对英文写作熟悉了之后,就会慢慢发现,上述句子中的―I‘m quite certain that a growing number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that‖(句子2)除了占用了你策划主题句的时间,实在没有什么实用价值。

相反,如果写作时不写这样的套句,而直接用副词引出主题句,则不光观点鲜明、结构简练,还能让考官一眼看到主题。以上句为例,我们不如干脆写成:

―Undeniably, the Internet has offered people a way to communicate.‖(句子3)这岂不更为简练?所以,考生与其花时间去背诵和主题无关的引言,还不如把精力放在主题句本身的锤炼上,完善结构,增加修辞,把主题句写精致。比如上面的句子,我们可以进一步改写成:―Undeniably, the Internet has revolutionized the ways people communicate.‖(句子4)大家可以对比一下句子2和句子4,显然句子4的结构和修辞更有英语的韵味。

类似的替换写法很多,以下是一些常用的替换写法,大家可以参考: 1. ―It is an indisputable fact that …‖换成―Undeniably, …‖

2. ―We hold it truth to be self-evident that …‖换成―Evidently, …‖ 3. ―There‘s no denying the fact that …‖换成―Undeniably, …‖

4. ―It is a well-known fact that …‖换成―Not surprisingly, …‖

5. ―Even more worrying is the fact that …‖换成―Even more disturbingly, …‖

6. ―It is obviously that …‖换成―Obviously, …‖

7. ―It is vitally important tha‖t换成―More importantly, … 2011英语六级CET6作文模板句型 Chapter One 文章开头句型

1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.

[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.

[2]. When it comes to .... , some people bielive that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)

[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether..... 1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .

[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.

[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)

[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly. ----- To be continued !!

1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.

[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. benn more visible/popular than... [2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...

[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ...... [4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......

1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点! [1]. \shared by more and more people .

\philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.

[2].\


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