1. I am delighted/glad/happy to announce that/notify you that/inform you that/tell you that/ let you know that formal to informal 宣布好消息
2. Please be informed /be advised that/note that/ formal to informal 但消息的类型比较中性
3.We are afraid that / We are sorry to inform you/We regret to inform you宣布坏消息
这里不用announce,因为之前说过尽量不要抄题干的单词, 请换词, 换词也是bec写作中的一个重要考核技能—“丰富的词汇”。
We are glad to informal you that the annual x’mas party would be held at 7,00pm on Wednesday, 18th of December/12th, December in boarding hall as scheduled (换了planned).
这里有三点
1.用we而不用I,因为在商务写作里, 可以用we的地方, 尽量用we.因为, 商务里更偏爱团队的口吻。
2. 用被动 表示更正式, 而主动是更偏向 意愿。
3. 具体时间的表达和他们的介词。 At + 具体几点 (一定要说明am or pm或者用24小时制), on + 具体的日子(几月几号, 星期几), in + 年, 月。
第二个内容点:
All staff with company are welcomed。(with company比 with partner更正式) 第三:
The programmes available are given/shown below:
A three-course dinner, dance, and raffle.
商务常识:不要写24-26, 因为不会有人去公司的party, 一般schedule 在13-20左右 补充:对于数字的写法, 10以上的用Arabic digit, 10以下用英文。0, 7,的手写体。 Note: p3写分