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7. 同义替换
1)准备 prepare (提纲)， plan 2) 详细信息 detailed information (提纲)， particular accounts
3) 订购 order, place an order for 4) 方式 method, terms of payment
8. 代词替换
I wonder if it is convenient …
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9. 精彩观点 无
10. 原因、建议 订购原因： 声誉良好，质量优良?
写作常见错误分析?
一、语法错误 （一）句子结构错误 1． 主从句叠置 1)越来越多的学生喜欢用电脑。 2)仍然还有许多问题需要引起注意和解决。 误：1)There are more and more students like to use the computer. 2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? 正：1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer.
? ? ? ? ? / More and more students like to use the computer. 2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved. 2． 简单句叠置 我喜欢上网，我几乎每个周末都去网吧。 误：I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend. 正：I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
? ? 3． 从句叠置 众所周知计算机在生活的很多方面起着重要的作用。
? ? ? ? ? ? 误：As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. 正：It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life. 4． 句子成分缺失 如果努力工作，我们肯定会成功。 误：If work hard, we will surely be successful. 正：If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.
? ? ? ? 5． 语序错误 1）为什么大学生花在电脑上的时间越来越多？ 2）我经常好奇他们哪里来的钱？ 误：1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?
? ? ? 2) I often wonder where have they got their money. 正：1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer? 2) I often wonder where they have got their money.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? （二）动词形式错误 1．时态错误 许多人认为互联网在将来会更有用。 误：Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 正：Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2．语态形式错误 1）对于你要来的这个消息我已经兴奋好几天了。 2）大多数学生对餐厅的服务满意。 误：1)I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.