? 正：Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan. 3) A room often lives 6-8 students. 正：In a room often live 6-8 students.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? 4) I think this great change has three reasons. 正：I think there are three reasons for this great change. 5) The prices of the food are too expensive. 正：The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.
? ? ? ? ? ? 6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. 正：The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. 四、标点符号及大小写错误 1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities. 正：However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
? ? 2) The man was racing down the street. Because he was late for the class. 正：The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.
? ? ? ? ? ? 3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much. 正：At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much. 4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis. 正：My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis. 5) The best English film in my eyes is《Forrest Gump》. 正：The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.
三、议论文
开头引言段(Introduction)：
引言内容 + 论点句 中间正文段 (Body)： 主题句一 + 论据 主题句二 + 论据
结尾结论段 (Conclusion)： 总结句 +引申句
? ? （一）．开头方法 开头段由“引言+论点句”构成, 这里重点放在增加引言魅力上。三个注意点：
? ? ? ? 1.和主题密切相关； 2.引发读者的阅读兴趣； 3.不可过长，以免喧宾夺主。
1．引语法：引用别人的话，通常是名言、格言，吸引读者
2．定义法：对文章主题中关键词加以界定，借此引发讨论
3．提问法：开头提出一个或一连串问题，引起读者思考。由于结论往往是所提问题的答案，此法可增强文章的逻辑性。
4．阐述背景：即简明扼要地提供话题出现的背景
5． 树立靶子
6． 摆出两种观点
以 “The Importance of Extracurricular Activities” 为例：
? 1.引语法：As the saying goes, “variety is the spice of life” , various extracurricular activities should serve as the spice of college life. In my opinion, extracurricular activities are important to college students’ personal growth.
? 2. 定义法：Extracurricular activities are school-based activities organized by teachers or students themselves with an aim to develop the students’ interests and improve their all-around abilities. In my opinion, extracurricular activities not only make college life