? This is not to say, however, that we should neglect the problems it has caused.
? But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted. 第2句
想反方观点的论据，或在特殊、极端情况下的一些合理性。进一步说明该段第一句话。
There are, of course, students interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society. Explanation:
可选用Of course或 Indeed开始本句。 第3句
让步后最终转折。表达“即便如此，反方观点在大多数情况下还是不可行的”或“即使存在上面提到的负面，正面影响仍是大于负面的”。 But unfortunately these people are few and far between. Explanation:
可选用But, However, Yet等词开始本句。
该段为文章次要信息，可点到为止，不可花费过多时间和笔墨纠缠。 实在不知如何反驳了，可用无赖写法：“（虽然反方观点也有道理）但正方观点仍然更有道理。”
? But still, job-related skills are more important for most students. ? But still, the cos are far greater.
其实本句还可以不用反驳，再写反方第二论据，或针对第一论据的拓展、支持、举例。不过这样处理后在结论段要表达相对中立的观点态度。 第五段 第1句
结论段。重申写作观点。这句话其实是针对首段最后一句话改写。 ? In summary, 总之 ? In conclusion, 总之
In summary, the major function of universities should be providing most students job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment, and thus helping the society function better. Explanation:
通常，考官读完一篇作文后印象最深的会是文章中的例子和结尾段。所以该句不是简单的改写，而应是递进或强调。可用强调句型：It is sth. that... 第2句
照顾反方观点。表达“同时，我们不能忽视反方观点的价值，或低低估某事的负面影响”。
? Meanwhile, 同时
Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other important roles universities are undertaking. Explanation: 模板句式
Meanwhile, we should not ignore/neglect/overlook/underestimatesth.’s negative effects. 第3句
其实末段有了上面两句话已经完整了。如果要冲刺高分，我们要再加一句话，给文章画一个有力的句号，或提升文章的思想境界，立意升华。
? By doing so we can ensure that...
? Only by doing so can we make sure that... (only在句首注意倒装)
15句高级作文写作分析
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
Model Essay
Watching TV is one of the most important children’s leisure activities. However, discussion now centres on whether it brings more harm than good. My view is that too much time spent on it surely has negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inappropriate programs and channels for them.
首段 第1句 第2句 第3句
With the rapid development of science and technology, TV shows are designed so vivid and attractive that not only kids but eve adults are
背景引入 交代辩论话题 作者观点，中立 much easier to get addicted to them. When children spend more time sitting in front of a screen, they are isolated from the real world. They do not have enough time to socialize, or to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. Also, their eyesight will be weakened by staring at the screen for too long.
第2段 第2句 第1句 第一论据：看电视易上瘾（形式问题，对儿童身体发育不好） 展开支持。其实写的是：看电视上瘾的结果是什么。省掉了This means that... 第3句 第4句 继续展开。其实是不良结果并列 继续并列。因为思想充分，想说的太多，代替了so,... 重申观点这个句子
Moreover, questionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since their minds are impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV programme rating system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes. So, TV is not always a good one in the sense that parents really cannot control what comes on the screen. 第3段 第2句 第1句 第二论据：有不良的电视内容（内容问题，对儿童心理发展不好） 展开支持，事实例证