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继续展开。其实是不良结果并列 Of course, there are many educational and inspirational TV shows, such as Disney cartoons which enable kids to have fun in the learning process, facilitate their intellectual development and help them learn caring, sharing, courage, honesty and other virtues from an early age. These benefits of TV on a child’s education cannot be denied. 第4段 第1句 反方观点。注意这一句话里包含了反方的观点和论据。用复杂句、举例、并列等手法列举了看电视对儿童的诸多好处 第2句
In sum, spending a long time watching TV is harmful and parents should either follow TV rating guidelines or carefully choose the programs for children. 末段 第一句 一句话高度总结全文。因为感到字数已够，就不在累述
重申反方有道理 五段式转换四段式 什么情况下写四段式
同时满足下面条件，可选择写四段式：
① 题目要求“Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.” ② 关于该题目你的立场完全中立，不偏向任何一方。或双方观点你都不同意，结论段提出个人的新观点。（此时四段式显得更加中立平衡）
③ 正方反方你都能同时找出两个论据支持或驳斥。（如果正方写了两个论据，反方只写一个论据，其实质上还是五段式）
④ 你的写作功力足够。（思路清晰，逻辑强大，语法扎实，论据丰富）
15句四段式逻辑结构
首段 第二段 第三段 第四段 末段 五段式 第1句 第2句 第3句 第1句 第2句 第3句 第1句 第2句 第3句 第1句 第2句 第3句 第1句 引入背景 辩论话题 写作观点 第一论据 说理 重申观点 第二论据 举例 例证解释 反方观点 反方论据 驳斥 总结正方 首段 四段式 第1句 第2句 第3句 第1句 第2句 第3句 第4句 第5句 第1句 第2句 第3句 第4句 第1句 引入背景 辩论话题 写作观点 正方观点及第一论据 说理 第二论据 例证 重申观点 反方观点及第一论据 说理 第二论据 例证 中立总结或个人新观点 第二段 第三段 末段 第2句 提及反方 第2句 进一步解释 第3句
立意升华 第3句 立意升华 剑桥雅思8考官四段式9分范文及行文逻辑
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools coexist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable. 首段
Some educationalists think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools because they believe this environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their studies. This is probably true to some extent. It also allows more equality among pupils and gives more opportunity to all those at the school to choose subjects more freely without gender prejudice. For example, a much higher proportion of girls study science to a high level when they attend girls’ schools than their counterparts in mixed schools do. Similarly, boys in single-sex schools are more likely to take cookery classes and to study languages, which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.
第二段 第1句 第2句 第3句 第4句 第5句
正方观点及第一论据 拓展解释（稍作肯定） 第二论据（以also为标志） 举例1（支持第二论据） 举例2（支持第二论据） 第1句 背景引入，作者观点（通过and合并为一句） On the other hand, some experts would argue that mixed schools prepare their pupils better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and are consequently not emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with the opposite sex. They are also able to learn from each other, and to experience different types of skill and talent then might be evident in a single gender environment.
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Personally, I think that there are advantages to both systems. I went to a mixed school, but feel that I myself missed the opportunity to specialize in science because it was seen as the natural domain and career path for boys when I was a girl. So because of that, I would have preferred to go to a girls’school. But hopefully times have changed, and both genders of students can have equal chances to study what they want to in whichever type of school they attend.
末段 第1句 第2句 第3句 第4句 个人观点 解释说明 重申 立意升华 反方观点 第一论据 第二论据（以also为标志）