When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there. 【参考答案】
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第一处：children改为child。考查名词单复数。根据I和a可知，这里应用可数名词单数形式，故改为child。
第二处：late改为later。根据语境可知，此处表示＂很多年后＂，故改为later。
第三处：end前添加the。考查冠词。此处at the end of是固定词组，表示＂在……的最后＂。 第四处：her改为him。考查代词。根据上文的he可知，此处应改为him。
第五处：was改为were。考查主谓一致。根据we可知，谓语动词应该用复数形式，故改为were。
第六处：knowing改为know。考查动词。pretend (not) to do sth.＂假装(不)做某事＂，此处是
不定式，后面需要用动词原形，故改为know。
第七处：去掉had。考查动词。根据语境和下文的＂would talk＂可知，此处应该用would do结构。
第八处：chat改为chatted。考查时态。根据本文的整体时态可知，应用一般过去时，故改为chatted。
第九处：in改为on。考查介词。on the top of是固定词组，表示＂在……的上面＂。 第十处：excited改为exciting。考查形容词。根据语境和主语为It可知，此处表示＂令人激
动的＂，故用-ing形式的形容词。
【名师点睛】
高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高，就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查，而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。
这篇短文主要是一些词法错误，词法的测试包括：定冠词和不定冠词的用法；名词的单复数和名词的所有格；动词的时态、语态、语气，情态动词和非谓语动词等；人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法；介词的搭配；并列连词、从属连词的用法；形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法；固定搭配和习惯用法。
题组二（2015年高考真题） Passage1(2015·新课标全国卷I)
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. 【参考答案】
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I 错误！未找到引用源。 I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in 错误！ countryside. There 未找到引用源。the air is clean 错误！未找到引用源。 the mountains are green. Unfortunately, 错误！未找到引用源。 the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies havebeen shown that global warming has already become a very 错误！未找到引用源。 problem. The 错误！未找到引用源。 we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. 错误！未找到引用源。 rare animals are dying out. We must 错误！未找到引用源。 ways to protect 错误！未找到引用源。 environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. 【答案解析】
【语篇解读】作者是孩子的时候，梦想生活在城市。二作者现在生活在城市，却向往着家乡，因为那里更少的污染。
第一处：think→thought。前两句是回忆童年的事情，因此应用一般过去时，把think改为thought。
第二处：在countryside前加the。 in the countryside ＂在农村＂，应在countryside前加上冠词the。
第三处：or→and。根据前后句之间为并列关系可知，此处应把or改为and。
第四处：on→with。随着工业化的发展，环境被污染了。这里表示伴随状况，因此把on改为with。
第五处：去掉been。很多研究表明：全球变暖是一个非常严重的问题。本句应用主动语态，因此去掉been。
第六处：seriously→serious。应用形容词serious修饰名词，因此把seriously改为serious。 第七处：airs→air。air为不可数名词，因此把airs改为air。
第八处： Much→Many。Much修饰不可数名词，rare animals为复数形式，因此把Much改为Many。
第九处： found→find。在情态动词must 之后应用动词原形，因此把found改为find。 第十处：your→our或the。本句的主语为We，用了第一人称，因此把物主代词your 改为
our，此处也可以改为the。
【名师点睛】
改错题整体难度适中，文章简单易懂。考点分布均匀，添、删、改比例为1:1:8。重点考查时态、名词的单复数、冠词、连词、副词以及介词的搭配等。考生解此类题型时一般应遵循保持句子原意的原则，即不能改变文章或作者所表达的意思，包括其语气和上下文的逻辑关系。只对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、行文关系错误进行改正，且要小改而不大改。
Passage2(2015·新课标全国卷II)
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.
Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, ＂How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.＂ Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【参考答案】
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very much that crowded. Tony saw a toy 错误！ a shop window. He liked it so 未找到引用源。
he quickly walked into the shop. After 错误！未找到引用源。 at the toy for some time, he turned around and found 错误！未找到引用源。his parents were missing. Tony was scared and 错误！ to cry. A woman saw him crying and 错误！ him to wait outside 未找到引用源。未找到引用源。 shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw 错误！ parents. Mom 错误！未找到引用源。未找到引用源。said, ＂How nice to see you again! Dad and I were 错误！未找到引用源。 worried.＂ Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案解析】
【语篇解读】本文讲述了小男孩Tony和父母上街购物，街上人多，Tony没有告诉父母就独自进了一家商店，结果和父母走散，后来在街上又得以相见的故事。
第一处：parent→parents。结合下文的＂his parents were missing＂可知托尼是和爸爸妈妈一
起去购物的，因此应用复数形式parents。
第二处：on→in。结合生活常识可知，这里表示在商店橱窗里摆放着一个玩具，故应用in。 第三处：去掉very。这里 so...that...引导结果状语从句，表示＂如此……以至于……＂，因此very应去掉。
第四处：looks→looking。结合语境这里应用动名词作介词After的宾语，故应把looks改为looking。
第五处：where→that或者去掉where。本句中连词that引导的从句充当动词found的宾语，
that不作句子成分只起连接作用，同时宾语从句又可以省略掉连词that。
第六处：begun→began。这里是对过去发生的事情的客观叙述，应用一般过去时，故应把begun改为began。
第七处：telling→told。此处and连接的两个先后发生的动作在时态上应保持一致，故应把telling改为told。
第八处：a→the。结合语境可知，同一名词第二次提到应表示特指，故应把shop前的a改为the。
第九处：parents前加his。结合语境可知，这里parents并不是表示泛指而是指托尼的爸爸妈
妈，故应在parents前加his。
第十处：terrible→terribly。修饰形容词应用副词，故用terribly。 【名师点睛】
通过短短的100多个词，使考生能正确运用各类词和固定搭配，如动词、名词、副词、代词和连词，辨别并改正错误。总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常见的错误。多读多练习就能找出问题所在，也能对写作有帮助。
Passage3(2015·四川卷)
Hi, Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice. Grace 【参考答案】 Hi, Janice,
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