4）要重视双赢思维，同年级教师间要真诚合作，共同探讨。 希望大家能根据自身情况，把中考书面表达与本班学生实际结合起来考虑，找到一条更适合自己的中考书面表达复习之路来。祝在座的每位老师所教班级在今年中考书面表达上旗开得胜，在今年英语中考中马到成功。
中考英语书面表达六类常见错误分析 点击数：172 次 录入时间：2010-10-18 15:26:00 编辑：walter-75 下一页 1 2 3 4 5 6 （一）文不达意 「要点领悟」 在英语书面表达的提示信息中，常有这样的语句“可适当增加细节”或“可适当发挥”，但所增加的内容应该与文章相关。如果所“发挥”的内容与文章无关，就是“画蛇添足”了。 「信息提示」 根据下面的4幅图画用英语写一篇短文，要求故事包括所有图画的主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使意思连贯。词数在100以上。 「习作实况」 One day， an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move. But to everyone’s anger, the car ran away as quickly as it could. The old woman had to lie on the ground and cried （1）。 Luckily， a man， who was sweeping the street nearby， saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. He was angry with the driver （2）。 Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her carefully and gave her some medical care. After that， the dustman took her home. When the old woman‘s daughter knew what had happened to her mother， she was moved deeply and thanked him very much. After a while the dustman left and went to do his work. The daughter thanked him again （ （3）。 「精讲点拨」
（1）此句与图中提示不相符，应删去。 （2）此处加写这句属多余，也与图画内容不符。
（3）文章写到“??very much.”处已经很完整了，加上这一句使行文显得重复、累赘。
「精品范文」
One day， an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move a little. Luckily，a man，who was sweeping the street nearby， saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her carefully and gave her some medical care. After that， the dustman took her home. When the old woman’s daughter knew what had happened to her mother，she was moved deeply and thanked him very much. （二）名词单复数 「要点领悟」
同学们在写作时，往往把重点放在文章的构思和句子结构上，有时忽略了名词的单复数。在中考作文中，如果名词的数使用混乱，也会导致较多的失分。 「信息提示」
假如你是吴强，去年春天和几位同学到东浦岛野餐，以“The happiest day”为题写一篇80-100词的作文。要求条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点规范。 「习作实况」
The happiest day Last spring my classmate （1） and I went to Dongpu Island to have a picnic. It was March 2. The weather was fine and there was hardly a cloud in the sky. We started early that morning. We all carried something nice to eat and drink. We sang happily on our ways （2） there. After about one and a half hour （3）， we got to the island. The water in the lake was nice and clean and we could see flowers and grasses （4） all around us. How beautiful it was！ After about twenty minute‘s （5） rest， we divided ourselves into four groups and cooked our lunch. Most of us did the cooking for the first time. After a while， everything was ready. We put all the food on a big piece of paper. There was meat， fish， fruit and vegetable （6）。 How delicious they were！ We enjoyed our lunch and there was a big smile on everyone’s faces （7）。 「精讲点拨」
（1）classmate在本句中看不出错误来，如果结合第二段的?? four groups就可发现classmate要用复数形式。
（2）在on one‘s way 结构中，way 没有复数形式。
（3）这儿不是半个小时，而是一个半小时，所以hour要用复数。 （4）此处指普通的草，多用单数。
（5）此处应将minute‘s改为minutes’，即twenty minutes‘ rest. （6）此处应用vegetable的复数形式vegetables. （7）这儿指的是每个人的脸上，应将faces改为face. 「精品范文」
The happiest day Last spring my classmates and I went to Dongpu Island to have a picnic. It was March 2. The weather was fine and there was hardly a cloud in the sky. We started early that morning. We all carried something nice to eat and drink. We sang happily on the way there. After about one and a half hours，we got to the island. The water in the lake was nice and clean and we could see flowers and grass all around us. How beautiful it was！After about twenty minutes‘ rest， we divided ourselves into four groups and cooked our lunch. Most of us did the cooking for the first time. After a while， everything was ready. We put all the food on a big piece of paper. There was meat，fish，fruit and vegetables. How delicious they were！We enjoyed our lunch and there was a big smile on everyone’s face. （三）用词不当 「要点领悟」
文章构思新颖、结构严谨固然重要，但它只是文章的骨架。要充实内容，就得有一定的遣词造句的功力，在此基础知识就显得尤为重要了。 「信息提示」
李华平时总是忙于功课，很少做家务。母亲节这一天，她想帮妈妈做饭，却不小心切了手指，本想让妈妈在节日期间好好休息，却未能如愿。以“On Mother‘s Day”为题写一篇词数为80-100的短文。要求条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。 「习作实况」
On Mother's Day I'm usually busy with my studies and do few （1） housework when I come back from school. It was Mother's Day yesterday. I wanted Mum to have a good rest and I did all instead （2） her. I got up early yesterday morning and bought a lot of vegetables， fish and meat in the market. I washed them and then began to cook. I was sure I could do as well like （3） Mum. Bad luck！I cut one of my fingers and cried out. Mum and Dad rushed into （4） and Mum asked Dad to take me to the hospital. When we came back， dinner （5） ready. I felt sorry and said，“Mum had a busy Mother's Day again！”
「精讲点拨」
（1）housework是不可数名词，应用little来修饰。
（2）instead是副词，后不能接宾语，这儿应该用instead of.
（3）like虽然可用作介词，意为“像”，但这儿是as?? as??结构，因此此处应改为as well as??
（4）into是介词，其后要接宾语，但句中无宾语，所以改为副词in. （5）ready是形容词，不能单独作谓语，所以其前要加was. 「精品范文」
On Mother‘s Day I'm usually busy with my studies and do little housework when I come back from school. It was Mother's Day yesterday. I wanted Mum to have a good rest and I did all instead of her. I got up early yesterday morning and bought a lot of vegetables，fish and meat in the market. I washed them and then began to cook. I was sure I could do as well as Mum. Bad luck！I cut one of my fingers and cried out. Mum and Dad rushed in and Mum asked Dad to take me to the hospital. When we came back， dinner was ready. I felt sorry and said，“Mum had a busy Mother's Day again！” （四）母语干扰 「要点领悟」
许多同学在用英语写作时很容易受汉语的影响而写错句子，即写所谓的Chinglish.这是书面表达中常见的错误之一。 「信息提示」
请你根据实际情况，以“My School Life”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。 「习作实况」