My School Life I‘m a middle school student. Although our school is very usual （1）， but （2） it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers. The here （3） air is very fresh. In the morning， lots of schoolmates （4） early （5） go to school and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All of the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that， someone （6） are reading in the library， others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6：00. Oh！ How colorful my school life is！ 「精讲点拨」
（1）作者显然想表达“学校很一般或普通”，此处最好用common一词，而usual意思是“通常的”。
（2）受汉语“虽然??但是??”的影响，作者将这一意思直接译成英语“although?but?”，而在英语同一句子中只用这两个词的其中之一表示汉语的“虽然??但是??”。
（3）here是副词，用来修饰名词时应位于被修饰词之后。
（4）schoolmate指校友、同学，通常不包含自己在内，改为students好些，指全校学生。
（5）“早早到校”的英语表达是go to school early， 副词early应位于句末。 （6）someone意思是“某人”，要改为some students. 「精品范文」
My School Life I‘m a middle school student. Although our school is very common，it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers. The air here is very fresh. In the morning，lots of students go to school early and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that，some students are reading in the library，others are playing and talking on the
playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6：00. Oh！How colorful my school life is！ 五）语态错误 「要点领悟」
英语的语态分为主动语态和被动语态，主要由动词的变化形式来体现。英语中有些不及物动词或不及物动词词组，汉语理解往往是及物的，而不及物动词却有汉语中及物动词的意思，所以同学们在平时的英语学习中要特别注意这一点。 「信息提示」
比较下面两幅图片。请以“Great Changes in Our Country”为题写一篇短文，介绍改革开放20多年来祖国的巨大的变化。词数80左右。
提示词：overpass 天桥 「习作实况」
Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have been （1） taken place in our country. Many buildings have been builded （2） in cities and towns， even at villages. The more cars we have， the more crowded the roads are. So the roads were become （3） wider and wider. Many overpasses have been builded （4） in big cities. Chinese people‘s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs， washing machines， fridges， computers，cars，etc. These things couldn’t buy （5） twenty years ago. We‘ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful. 「精讲点拨」
（1）take place是不及物动词短语，没有被动语态。
（2）、（4） 被动语态的过去分词用得不对。
（3）动词become在这里是系动词，后接形容词比较级作表语。系动词通常没有被动语态。
（5）此处应用被动式couldn‘t be bought. 「精品范文」
Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have taken place in our country. Many buildings have been built in cities and towns， even at villages. The more cars we have， the more crowded the roads are. So the roads became wider and wider. Many overpasses have been built in big cities. Chinese people‘s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs， washing machines， fridges， computers， cars， etc. These things couldn’t be bought twenty years ago. We‘ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful. （六）习惯用法和固定搭配 「要点领悟」
有的同学在写作时常常把一些习惯用语、固定词组及结构错误搭配，结果写出来的句子让人看不懂。我们在平时若将这些英语基础知识牢固掌握，考试时就会得心应手、从容自若。 「信息提示」
2005年10月1日 星期六 睛
昨天你叔叔打电话来，请你找几个朋友去他农场收桔子。于是今天早上6点，你和朋友就坐汽车出发了。一到农场便开始干活。桔子树上结满了桔子，你们又摘桔子又装车，忙完后在那儿吃了午餐，还吃了不少桔子。下午坐卡车回家。你们虽然忙了一天，却感到非常快乐。
请根据以上提示写一篇80词左右的英语日记。请注意日记的格式。 「习作实况」
October 1，2005，
Saturday Sunny
My uncle called me yesterday. He said in the phone （1） that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends. Today morning （2） we left home at 6：00. We went there by a bus （3）。 The trees in （4） the farm were really full with （5） oranges. When we got there， we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work， we had the lunch （6） at my uncle‘s house. We had many oranges， too. In the afternoon， we came back home by truck. We were busy today， but we were happy.「精讲点拨」 （1）“在电话里说??”应用介词on. （2）“今天上午”的英语说法是this morning. （3）by+交通工具名词时，其间不用冠词或其他修饰词。 （4）“在农场里”介词用on，应是on the farm.
（5）“??充（结）满??”有两种表示方法，be full of ?? 或be filled with?? （6）英语中在表示吃一日三餐时，三餐前不加冠词。 「精品范文」
October 1， 2005， Saturday
Sunny My uncle called me yesterday. He said on the phone that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends. This morning we left home at 6：00. We went there by bus. The trees on the farm were really full of oranges. When we got there，we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work， we had lunch at my uncle‘s house. We had many oranges， too. In the afternoon， we came back home by truck. We were busy today，but we were happy.
中考英语书面表达写作技巧汇总
（一）掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
（二）巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词
表示罗列增加
First, second, third,
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,