翻译1：经常做运动会提高人的自信
错误的句子：Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence.
错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰 错误2 rise 不及物动词
正确的句子：Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence) 可以用定语从句扩充：
Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly.
注： 不可以说“regular doing exercise”，因为形容词regular 不可以修饰doing
中文翻译：经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。 翻译2： 依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力（mental arithmetic）。
错误的句子：Rely heavily on calculators will have negative impact on human beings` mental arithmetic. 错误1 rely 是动词，不能充当主语 错误2 impact 可数名词，要有冠词。 错误3 human beings 多余，不是人类莫非是动物么？ 正确的句子：
Relying heavily on calculators will have a negative impact on mental arithmetic. 句子结构： 主语+及物动词+宾语(impact) 也可以用现在分词扩充：
The excessive reliance on calculators is likely to have an adverse impact on children's mental arithmetic and pose a threat to their intellectual development.
中文翻译：过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响，对孩子的智力发展有威 胁。
翻译 3： 很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里（male-dominated world）找工作。 错误的句子：A number of girks are not willing to hunting jobs in the male-dominated world 错误 1 willing to do something 固定搭配 错误 2 a number of 在这里感觉是在某个地方，有一些女孩不愿意做什么。 错误 3 定冠词不恰当，因为世界上男人居多的行业有很多，不可能特指
正确的句子：Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world. 句 子结构： 主语+系动词+表语(willing) 也可以用状语从句扩充：
Numerous women are unwilling to find employment in a male-dominated world because they can face barriers to top-level promotion.
中文翻译： 很多女孩不愿意在男人为大多数的行业找工作，因为她们会面临在高职位升迁 中的阻碍。 翻译4：环境问题已经成为公众关心的焦点。 错误的句子：environmental problem has been the focus of public concern. 错误1 problem 可数名词，要加冠词或者复数 错误2 be 是表示“是”的意思，强调状态，要用“become”，强调变化
正确的句子：The environmental problem has become the focus of public concern. 句子结构：
主语+系动词（become）+表语（the focus）
拓展的句子：The environmental problems has become the focus of public concern, for
example, greenhouse emissions. That is why the government limits people to use private cars in urban areas. 错误1：同位语“greenhouse emissions”离所修饰名词太远 错误2：主谓不一致 修改：
Environmental problems such as greenhouse gas emissions have become the focus of public concern and some regulations can be enforced to tackle these problems.
中文翻译：环境问题比如温室气体的发放已经成为公共关注的焦点，因此一些规则应该被 实施来处理这些问题。 翻译5：家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间。
错误的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 错误1 make an effort to 固定表达
错误2 curb 一般是抑制某种行为，而不是接time. 错误3 “watching TV on children”也不通。
正确的句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time. 句子结构：主语（parents and teachers）+及物动词(make)+宾语(effort) 拓展的句子：
Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encourage them to do more out-door activities. 错误：protecting 和encourage 不对称
正确的句子：
Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encouraging them to do more outdoor activities. 注：这句话的分词最好不要改成定语从句，因为前面不知道是修饰“screen time”还是 “limit screen time”
中文翻译：家长和老师应该努力去减少孩子看电视的时间，这样会保护孩子的视力，鼓励 他们做户外运动。 翻译6：艺术不属于学校的主科。
错误的句子：Arts is not regarded as a core curriculum at school. 错误1 主谓不一致 错误2 curriculum 是所有课程的总称
正确的句子： The arts are not among core subject areas at school.
句子结构： 主语（The arts）+系动词（are）+表语 （介词among+宾语充当表语） 拓展的句子：
The arts are not among core subject areas at school. However, we should learn them at school . Because they could add spice of our life. 错误1：because 是从属连词，要连接两个句子。 错误2：add spice to life 才是固定搭配 错误3： them 有点指代不清楚. 正确的句子：
The arts are not among core subject areas at school but deserve a place in the curriculum, for these subjects add spice to life.
中文翻译：虽然艺术不属于学校的主要课程，但是它们在课程大纲里值得拥有一席之地， 因为这些科目能够给生活添色彩。
翻译7 农村的失业问题在某种程度上可以通过城乡转移 （rural-to-urban shift）解决。
错误的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be address by rural-to-urban shift. 错误1 被动语态没有过去分词 错误2 shift 是可数名词，最好要有冠词
正确的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift. 句子结构：（主语+及物动词+宾语）的被动语态 拓展的句子：
Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift, because rural areas are lack of industry and services, which causes high unemployment rate.
错误1：because 后面的内容只是解释了为什么乡村的失业率很高，但是没有解释为什么 城乡转移可以解决这个问题。 错误2：rate 可数名词
错误3：一般不要lack of 充当表语 正确的句子：
The lack of infrastructure and government funding in rural areas is the main cause of unemployment, which can be addressed partially by the rural-to hift.
中文翻译：农村失业问题的主要原因是缺少基础建设和政府资助，这个问题在某种程度可 以通过城乡转移解决。 翻译8 经济的下滑（economic slowdown）导致失业率的上升
错误的句子：Economic slowdown made the climbing unemployment rate. 错误1 不要用过去时 错误2 用不定冠词好一点，因为正在上升的失业率一般不可能是唯一的。 正确的句子：Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语 拓展的句
子： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, in view of the fact that employers are reluctant to recruit new employees so as to cut overhead. 错误： 可能产生歧义，” recruit new employees” 是雇佣，“reluctant to recruit new employees”是不愿意雇用。到底是哪个事情导致“cut overhead”? 正确的句子：
Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate because employers intend to cut overheads and refuse to recruit new employees.
中文翻译：经济下滑已经导致失业率上升，因为雇主打算裁员而且拒绝雇用新员工。 另外一个豆瓣的学生写的句子也不错，我发出来：
Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, as people balk at starting up new businesses and a number of giant companies downsize their workforce.
中文翻译：经济下滑已经导致失业率上升，因为人们对开展新失业犹豫不决，而且很多大 公司裁员。
翻译9 因为不够明朗的经济前景（economic outlook），很多公司不可能招聘新的职员。 错误的句
子： Because of unclear/ambiguous economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employments. 错误1 ambiguous 一般不修饰OUTLOOK 错误2 应该是employees 正确的句子：
Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees. 句子结构：主语+系动词+表语
Because of 是介词词组引导原因状语 拓展的句子：
Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employers, so a considerable number of graduates will face the problem of unemployment. 错误：”because of”和“so” 一般避免连用 错误2： employees 雇员 正确的句子：
Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees and a considerable number of graduates fail to find employment.
中文翻译：因为经济前景的不确定，很多公司不可能招聘新人，因此大量的毕业生找不到 工作。 翻译10 高层建筑有时候被认为是城市的eyesore。 错误的句子（4.5 分）：Occasionally，high﹣rise buildings are tend to be regarded as the eyesore of a city.
错误1 Occasionally 表示的意思是“偶尔地，很少地” 错误2 “be + do”永远是错的 正确的句子：High-rise buildings are sometimes regarded as eyesores of the city.
注：这句话里如果说“the eyesore”就是特指，意思就是城市只有一处难看的地方，事实 上未必如此。 句子结构：“somebody regards something as something”是“主语+ +宾语+宾语补 足语”的结构。 而这句话是这个结构的被动语态。
翻译11：经济的发展需要年轻的劳动者
错误的句子：The economic development requires a great number of fresh working forces 错误1 working force 没有这个表达
正确的句子：A country's economic development relies on a supply of young workers 句子结构： 主语+及物动词+宾语 也可以用分句扩充，“the problem is that”是表语从句
A country's economic development relies on a supply of young workers, but the problem is that the aging society has an adverse impact on the labour force.
中文翻译：一个国家的经济发展依靠一定量的年轻劳动力，但是问题是老龄化的社会对劳 动力有负面影响。 翻译12：工作很多的人没有时间去休息，去充电（recharge batteries）
错误的句子：People do with heavy workload cannot have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries 错误1 do 不知道功能是干嘛的。 错误2 time 不可数 错误5 cannot 是表示不可能，这里应该是do not
正确的句子：People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest and recharge batteries. 句子结构： 主语+及物动词+宾语，“to rest and recharge batteries”不定式充当的后置定语 也可以用定语从句扩充
People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest and recharge batteries, which can be harmful to their fitness.
中文翻译：工作很多的人没有足够的时间去休息和充电，这样对他们的健康有害。 翻译13 : 送贵重的礼物（lavish gifts）是中国的习惯
错误的句子：It is a custom for Chinese to send lavish gifts to others.
错误 custom 是习惯或者传统的意思，最好用动名词，而不是 “to send ..”这个不定式 正确的句子：It is customary for Chinese people to exchange lavish gifts. 句子结构： 主语+系动词+表语；it 是形式主语，“to exchange lavish gifts”不定式是真正 的主语。
其他选择：Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China 句子结构： 主语+系动词+表语 也可以用并列句+状语从句来扩充
Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China and many people feel they lose face when giving or receiving inexpensive gifts.
中文翻译：送贵重礼物是一种中国传统，当收到或者送便宜礼物的时候许多人觉得没面子。 翻译14 : 在中国，很多学生晚上都要自习
错误的句子：Large number of students in China have to study at night. 错误1 “a large number of ” 固定搭配
正确的句子：A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night. 句子结构： 主语+及物动词+ 宾语 也可以用状语从句来扩充
A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night, so extra curricular activities have to give way to studies. 中文翻译：在中国，许多学生都要在晚上自学，所以课外活动不得不给学习让路。 翻译15 : 空运产生很多的温室气体
错误的句子：Air freight is likely to exhaust a large number of greenhouse gases. 错误1 exhaust 这个词动词的时候，没有排放的意思（这个是很常见的错误！） 错误2 a large number of 很少形容gases, goods 这种强调数量的东西。 正确的句子：Air freight is likely to create enormous greenhouse gases.
注：这句话也可以使用完成时态：Air freight has produced enormous greenhouse gases. 完成 时在这里最大的问题是把air freight 变成了一个持续的完整的事物，而我们都知道空运是 有次数的分别。 句子结构：主语+ 系动词+ 表语 也可以用比较状语从句扩充
Air freight is likely to create more greenhouse gases than other modes of transport. 中文翻译：空运可能比其他运输方式产生更多的温室气体。 翻译16 : 未来几十年我们很难保护植物多样性
错误的句子：We will find it difficult for us to protect the biodiversity of vegetation in the coming decades. 错误1 we... for us 重复 错误2 vegetaion 略显重复
正确的句子：We will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 句子结构: 主语+ 谓语+宾语（it，形式宾语） + 宾语补足语（difficult），而不定式是真正 的宾语 还可以扩充为状语从句
Unless local authorities reduce the impact of city expansion on vegetation, we will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades.
中文翻译：除非当地政府减少城市扩张对植物的影响，否则在未来几十年里我们会发现保 护物种多样性很困难。 翻译17: heritage sites 因为城市发展而受到威胁
错误的句子：The development of cities have pose a threat on heritage sites. 错误1 have pose 动词错误而且主谓不一致 错误2 pose a threat to 固定搭配
正确的句子：The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites. 句子的结构: 主语（development）+ 及物动词(pose)+ 宾语(threat) 还可以用并列句扩充
The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites, but the government has no idea whether to protect or demolish these constructions.
中文翻译：城市的发展已经威胁到历史遗迹，但是政府还没有办法是否去保护还是毁坏这 些建筑。 翻译18 孩子很有可能有行为的问题
错误的句子：The children are likely to meet behavior problems. 错误1 meet problems 搭配不对 错误2 behavioural problems 固定搭配
正确的句子：The children are likely to have behavioural problems. 句子结构：主语+ 系动词+ 表语(likely) 还可以用定语从句扩充
The children who are exposed to abuse or neglect in the home are likely to behavioural problems.
中文翻译：在家遭受虐待或者忽视的孩子可能会有行为问题。 翻译19 人口的扩大是大量垃圾产生的原因 错误的句子：population expansion constitutes the main reason of enormous garbages. 错误1 reason for 固定搭配 错误2 garbage 和waste 都是不可数名词
正确的句子：The rapid population expansion is the main reason for the huge accumulation of waste. 句子结构：主语+ 系动词+ 表语(reason) 还可以用定语从句扩展
Population expansion is the main reason for the huge accumulation of waste, which can take decades to degrade.
中文翻译：人口的扩大是大量垃圾产生的原因，这些垃圾需要几十年才能降解。 翻译20 我们不能够忽视面对面的交流
错误的句子：It cannot be ignored by people to have some face-to-face communication. 错误1 it 指代不清楚 错误2 “to have face-to-face communication”不定式一般是表示没有发生而有可能发生的事 情。
正确的句子：We should not ignore face-to-face communication. 句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+宾语（communication） 还可以用状语从句扩充
We should not ignore face-to-face communication because this has a direct impact on social relationships.
还可以用并列句扩充
Internet can enrich our social lives, but we should not ignore face to face communication, because this has a direct impact on social relationships.
中文翻译：网络能够丰富我们的生活，但是我们不应该忽视面对面的交流因为它对社会关 系有直接影响。 翻译21 随着年龄增长，很难和朋友和家人保持联系
错误的句子：As the growing age, people is hard to connect with their families and friends frequently. 错误1 As the growing age 没有这个表达 错误2 people is 主谓不一致 错误3 人无难易之分 错误4 connect frequently 不搭配
正确的句子：With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends. 句子结构：主语(people)+ 谓语(find)+宾语（it，形式宾语） + 宾语补足语（difficult），而 不定式是真正的宾语
注：contact 动词的时候是及物动词，不能加介词，people find it easy to contact their friends today. 学生的句子：
With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, due to fact that they are occupied with career development and advance education. 错误= advance education 没有这个表达 错误4 connect frequently 不搭配 正确的句子：
With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, as they are occupied with work and other commitments.
中文翻译：随着年龄的增加，人们发现保持与亲人和朋友的联系变得困难，因为他们被工 作和其他任务占据。 翻译22 严格的惩罚是减少犯罪率的有效手段
错误的句子：Stiff sentences is an effective method to decrease crime rates. 错误1 主谓不一致 stiff sentences 错误2 decrease crime rates 表达不是很好
正确的句子：Stiff punishment is an effective method to reduce crime. 句子结构: 主语+ 系动词+ 表语；不定式“to reduce crime” 还可以用名词性从句和状语从句扩充
It is suggested that stiff punishment is an effective method to reduce crime, as offenders are fearful of getting caught and less likely to commit crime.
中文翻译：严厉的处罚是减少犯罪的有效方法，因为犯罪者害怕被抓而不太可能犯罪。 翻译23 政府对太空科技的投资可以支持
错误的句子：The investment on space technology should be supported by government. 错误1 investment in 固定搭配 错误2 governments or the government
正确的句子： The investment in space technology should be supported by the government. 句子结构：主语+ 及物动词（support 被动 语态）+ 宾语 还可以用状语从句和并列句扩充
The investment in space technology should be supported by the government because the commercialization of such technology will bring more business opportunities and improve people's living standards. 中文翻译：政府应该支持对太空科技的投资因为这些科技的商业化会带来更多的商业机会， 提高人们的生活水平。 翻译24 有些公共服务很难收支平衡
错误的句子：Some public services have problems in break even. 错误1 break 是动词，在这里 in 是介词，后面应该加动名词 正确的句子：Some public services have problems in breaking even. 句子结构： 主语+ 及物动词(have)+ 宾语(problems) 还可以用并列句扩充
Some public services have problems in breaking even and need government funds. 中文翻译：一些公共服务很难收支平衡，需要政府资金。 翻译25 我们的环境还是很糟糕
错误的句子：Our environment still be in a direstate. 错误1 没有谓语动词 正确的句子：Our environment is still in a dire state.
句子的结构：主语+ 系动词+ 表语(介宾短语in a dire state 充当) 还可以用状语从句扩充
Unless our modern lifestyle experiences a profound change, our environment will still be in a dire state. 或者： Unless we make profound changes in modern lifestyles, our environment will remain in a dire state.
中文翻译：除非我们的现代生活方式有深远改变，负责我们的环境还是会很糟。 翻译26 因为失业率高升，大学生感到有压力去努力学习 错误的句子：