错误的句子：Because of the globalisation, people should work with others who comes from different backgrounds. 错误1 the globalization 的the 比较多余
错误2 who comes from 没有必要用定语从句 错误3 should 有点过分了，“必须”的意思
正确的句子：Because of globalisation, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds.
注：这里的those 就是其他人的意思，不能说those people，这样会和主语重复。 句子结构: 主语(people)+ 及物动词（need）+ 宾语(to work)，“because of globalisation”介 宾短语充当状语 翻译58： 家庭环境被认为是小孩成长最重要的影响。
错误的句子：Family environment is widely thought to be the most important influence on children development. 错误 children development 没有所有格
正确的句子：Family environment is widely thought/believed to be the most important influence on children’s development.
句子结构: 主语(family environment)+ 及物动词的被动语态（thought + 宾语补足语(to be) 翻译59：在大城市有一些贫困的社区。
错误的句子： in large-scale cities have some deprived communities 错误 in large-scale cities 介宾短语不能够充当主语 正确的句子： There are some economically deprived communities in large cities. 句子结构: there be 句型 翻译60：奖学金可以鼓励更多的学生去学习研究生课程。
错误的句子： Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum. 错误1 scholarship 可数名词，应该有复数或者冠词 错误2 regarded as something 太过罗嗦 错误3 curriculum 不是course 的替换词，curriculum 的意思是课程大纲
正确的句子：Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduate courses. 句子结构：主语 (government grants)+及物动词(encourage)+宾语(students)+宾语补足语(to take postgraduate courses) 翻译61：我们需要采取措施去解决一些棘手的问题。
错误的句子：We must take measurement to tackle thorny problems. 错误measurement 的意思是测量
正确的句子： We need to have measures in place to solve some intractable problems. 句子结构：主语 （we）+及物动词(need)+宾语(to have ?.) 翻译62：经费削减让很多年轻人很难接受大学教育。 错误的句子：
Cutting the budget of the education pose a threat to the opportunities of the young people who want to take part in the higher education.
错误1: 动名词Cutting 做主语，但是谓语动词没有用单数。 错误2：pose a threat to the opportunities 搭配不好
错误3：后面用定语从句也是过分累赘，opportunities to do something 是习惯的表达。很 多中国学生习惯的问题是把表达复杂化，觉得那样才是好作文，而native speaker 更加注 意文字的简练和清楚。
正确的句子： Budget cuts make it difficult for many young people to receive a college education.
句子结构：主语 （Budget cuts）+及物动词（make）+宾语（it 形式宾语）+宾语补足语 （difficult）；这个句子真正的宾语是“to receive a college education” 翻译63：按照能力分班和学生的成绩没有明显的联系。
错误的句子：There is no clear link between selection in terms of students' ability and their academic performance. 错误: in terms of 是一个被中国学生用烂的词，有时候过分罗嗦
正确的句子：There is no clear link between grouping students by ability and their levels of attainment. 句子结构：there be 句型
翻译64：随着越来越多的年轻人参加志愿者工作，社区的凝聚力（cohesion）会加强 错误的句子
with more young people join the volunteer works, community's cohension will be enhanced. 错误1 with 是介词，后面不能加句子 错误2 work 不可数名词，不能加复数 正确的句子：
With an increasing number of young people participating in volunteer work, community cohesion will be enhanced.
句子结构：主语（community cohesion）+ 及物动词的被动语态 （be enhanced） 翻译65：基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知。 错误的句子
The impact that genetic food has on our health still remains unknown.
错误1 其实定语从句中，最好要规避这种先行词充当从句宾语的情况，读起来比较别扭。 错误2 remains 已经包含still。
错误3 genetic food 这个表达也不是很好。
正确的句子：The health effect of GE food remains unclear/yet to be known. 句子结构：主语（health effect）+系动词（remains）+表语（unclear） 也可以用状语从句拓展
The health effect of GE food remains unclear, so clear food labeling is strongly advocated. 注：clear food labeling 就是商场食品上清晰的标签（说清楚食物的特点）
中文翻译：基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知，所以清楚的食物标签被强烈提倡。 翻译66：移民有时候被认为是社会团结的一个威胁。
错误的句子Immigrants sometimes was recognised as a threat to the social cohesion. 错误1 为什么要过去时？ 错误2 主谓不一致
错误3 cohesion 不可数名词，为什么要用the 去特指？
正确的句子：Immigrants are sometimes recognised as a threat to social cohesion. 句子结构：原句可能是“people sometimes recognise immigrants as a threat。”（主语 people+及物动词recognise+宾语immigrants+宾语补足语as a threat），这句话是 被动语态。 翻译67：教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键。 错误的句子 ：Teaching quality has regarded as a key factor to student's academic performance. 错误1 has regarded 这个不是被动语态的完成时态 错误2 应该是students’
正确的句子：The quality of teaching has been identified as central to students’ academic performance. 句子结构：原句可能是“people have identified the quality of teaching as central to students’ academic performance。”（主语people+及物动词identify+宾语quality of teaching +宾语 补足语as central），这句话是 被动语态。 也可以用并列句拓展
The quality of teaching has been identified as central to students’ academic performance, and therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children.
中文翻译：教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键，因此，家长喜欢为孩子选择名校。 翻译68：法律应该将醉驾变成刑事犯罪。
错误的句子 ：the government should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence. 错误 定语从句还原是“a law is drunk driving”显然不对。 中国学生有个误区，就是一定要写 个从句，才能加分。
正确的句子：Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence.
句子结构：主语（legislation）+及物动词(make)+宾语(drink driving)+宾语补足语(a criminal offence) 翻译69：网络购物对于很多人已经成为生活中的很普通的一部分。
错误的句子 ：It has become an important part for most people to shop online in daily life. 错误 “part of daily life ”是固定的说法
正确的句子：Online shopping has become a normal part of people’s everyday life. 句子结构：主语+系动词+表语 翻译70：乡村地区给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音。
错误的句子 ：rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 错误1：rural area 可数名词，没有冠词，或者复数。 错误2：opportunity 在这里用复数比较好。 正确的句子：Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 句子结构：主语(rural areas)+及物动词(provide) +宾语(people)+宾语补足语(with opportunities) 拓展的句
子： Rural area is beneficial to people's fitness, because it provides people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 错误：rural area 可数名词，没有冠词，或者复数。 两个句子的主语都一样，还不如用分词 正确的句子：
Rural areas are beneficial to people's health, providing people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
中文翻译：乡村地区对人们的健康有益，因为它给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和 噪音。 翻译71：在一个消费社会里，人们不再满足生活必需品（bare necessities
错误的句子 ：in a throw-away society, people are not satisfied with bare necessities any more. 错误1：throw-away society 这个词伙不对。
错误2：not ? any more 一般是形容量的东西，而no longer 强调动作的持续。 正确的句子：
in the consumer society, people are no longer satisfied with bare necessities. 翻译72：电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化。
错误的句子 ：The impact on people's cultural level from computer, varies between ages. 错误1：cultural level 表达不对。 错误2：varies between ages 表达不对。
错误3：the impact from the computer 表达不对。
正确的句子：The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages. 句子结构：主语（impact）+不及物动词 （varies）；“of computers on literacy skills”都是 定语 拓展的句子(使用并列
句)： The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages and teachers have mixed feelings on the usage of computers.
中文翻译：电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化，老师对电脑的用法有复杂的感情。 翻译73： 媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众。
错误的句子 ：Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 错误1：Media 本身就是复数。 错误2：hurt 是动词，OF 前后要加名词。 错误3：attentions 不可数名词。
正确的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering. 句子结构：主语（the media）+及物动词 (attracts)+宾语 (attention)； ”方式状语 拓展的句子：
The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to the public. 错误1： while 是从属连词，后面不能直接加动词原形。 错误2 ignore 和bring 两个动词。 错误3 them 指代不清楚 正确的句子：
The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public.
中文翻译：媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众，而忽视对这些观众的有害结果，比如 将他们在公众面前曝光。 翻译74：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果。
错误的句子 ：Unhealthy lifestyle is the result of trend to rely on science and technology. 错误1：Unhealthy lifestyle 是可数名词，需要加冠词 错误2：“trend toward doing something”还有“tendency to do something”
正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology. 句子结构： 主语（unhealthy lifestyle）+系动词（is）+表语 （the result）; “of?”全是定语 拓展的句子：People’
s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, because this makes their lives more convenience. 错误1：convenience 是名词
错误2：because 引导的原因状语从句不清晰，到底是解释unhealthy lifestyle，还是解释 rely heavily on technology？ 正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on
technology, despite the fact that technology has made their lives convenient and improved their lives significantly.
中文翻译：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果，尽管事实上科技让他们 的生活更加方便，给他们的生活带来很大提高。 翻译75：贫穷是社区犯罪上升的原因。
错误的句子 ：The reason which cause increasely number of community crimes in society is poverty.
错误1：reason which cause， 从句的主谓不一致，而且搭配不好 错误2：increasely number 副词不能修饰名词 错误3：这个学生硬是把简单的事情罗嗦地说出来，很别扭。雅思考试考的是语言的通顺 和地道，而不是考你的句子是否够复杂。
正确的句子： Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities. 句子结构：主语（poverty）+系动词 （is）+表语(responsible) 拓展的句
子： Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, that means people's traveling will become more convenience and safety. 错误 1： 一般来说是 this means that
错误 2：become 是系动词，后面加形容词去修饰主语。 错误 3：safety 和前面 low –cost carriers 没什么联系。 正确的句子：Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an
astounding pace over the past decades, and this means that people are tempted to travel more frequently than before. 中文翻译：因为费用的下降，航空最近几十年发展得很快，这意味着人们会比以前更多旅 游。 翻译76：因为费用的下降，航空最近几十年发展得很快。
错误的句子 ：The airline has sharp development in recent decades, with the cost decline. 错误1：in recent decades 一般要用现在完成时态，这句话没有 错误2：“has sharp development”表达比较别扭 错误3：with 是个介词，后面不能加句子
正确的句子：
Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades. 句子结构： 主语（the aviation industry）+不及物动词(developed); “Because of low-cost carriers” 原因状 语；“over the past decades”时间状语； “at an astounding pace”程度状语 翻译77：非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡，生物多样性也会损失。 错误的句子 ：Hunting illegally leads to the extinct of species, as well as, biodiversity is deteriorated. 错误1：extinct 是个形容词
错误2：as well as 后面一般加名词，动名词，或者是比较状语从句的分句，很少加完整的 句子。
正确的句子：Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity. 主语（Illegal hunting）+及物动词（leads to）+宾语（extinction） 翻译78：动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用。 错误的句子 ：Animal experiment is occasionally unable to examine drugs side effects. 错误1：Animal experiment 可数名词，要加负数 错误2：occasionally 意思是“偶尔地，极少地” 错误3：drugs side effects 没有使用所有格
正确的句子：Animal experiments fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs. 翻译79：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分。
错误的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment. 错误1：一般是“part of” 错误2：“effort to do something”更为通顺，在这里
正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment. 句子结构： 主语（The invention of electric vehicles）+系动词（is）+表语 （part ）; “of?”全是定语 拓展的句子：
The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors 错误1：electric vehicles 重复 错误2：conduct exhaust emission 搭配问题
错误3：fossil fuel motors 用词不好，MOTOR 是马达的意思。 正确的句子：
The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars.
中文翻译：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分，因为这些汽车比传统 汽车产生较少的废气。 翻译80：有时候，很难去评估人类行为的环境代价。
错误的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental costs of people’s behaviors.
错误1：environmental cost 在这里用单数就好，因为是在说整个影响，而不是不同的影响。 错误2：behaviour 英式拼写
错误3：behaviour 在这里不用activities 好，因为行为是指人的瞬间举动，activities 一般是 持续时间比较长。 正确的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost human activities. 句子结构： 主语(it)+ 系动词（is）+表语 （difficult）；而“to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities”不定式充当形式主语。 拓展的句子：
Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, there is a necessity for the government enacting legislations to restrict some behaviors , which can also arise people's concern about environmental degradation. 错误1：there is a necessity for 别扭 错误2：arise 不及物动词 错误3：状语从句后，再写那么长的定语从句就多余了 正确的句子：
Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, it is necessary to enact laws to restrict some behaviours.
中文翻译：有时候，虽然很难去评估人类行为的环境代价，但是应该颁布法律以限制这些 行为。 翻译81：人口老龄化促使国家去放松退休年龄的限制。
错误的句子：Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban. 错误1：retirement age 是可数名词
错误2：reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好
正确的句子：the ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
句子结构：主语(ageing population)+及物动词(prompt)+宾语(countries)+宾语补足语(to raise?) 拓展的句子：
The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
错误：应该是skilled workers. Skillful 表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟 正确的句子：
The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 注：a problem 在这里是同位语，指代前面的shortage
中文翻译：人口老龄化导致高级技术工人的短缺，这个问题已经促使国家提高了法定退休 年龄。 翻译82：学校应该允许老师强制捣蛋的小孩离开教室。
错误的句子：Schools should allow teachers to make the children with disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms. 错误：children with disruptive behaviours 略显罗嗦
正确的句子：Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom. 原句：Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.
句子结构：主语（schools）+及物动词(permit)+宾语(teachers)+宾语补足语 (to use force?) 翻译83： 很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚。 错误的句子：Many people think that they are necessary to chaes after fashion. 错误：人没有necessary 这么一说； chase 在这里用作及物动词比较好。 正确的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.
句子结构：主语（many people）+及物动词(consider)+形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语 (necessary)； 真正的宾语是to follow fashion.
拓展的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion; otherwise, they believe they are behind the times. 中文翻译：很多人觉得有必要赶时尚；否则的话，他们相信自己过时了。