more fruits and vegetables every day. Don’t eat junk food much too often. Also, you should exercise regularly, such as taking up a ball game as a hobby.
Secondly, in order to make your school life colorful, I suggest you take part in all kinds of activities such as joining some clubs and doing some volunteering. Besides these, it’s also good to keep a diary and make new friends. I believe you will have a wonderful life in our school! (二)评分说明:
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语,完整准确地表述所提示的内容,书写工整。 分四挡评分:
1. 短文通顺完整,表达清楚,要点齐全,语言基本无误,17-20分;
2. 短文较通顺完整,表达基本清楚,要点比较齐全,语言有少量错误,12-16分; 3. 能写明基本要点,短文不够通顺完整,语言有较多错误,但尚能达意,6-11分; 4. 仅能写明部分要点,短文不完整,语言错误多,影响意思表达,0-5分。
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