词汇突破:prosperous繁荣的;Eligibility有资格的;符合条件的;有能力Someone who is eligible to do something is qualified or able to do it, for example because they are old enough. Most half the population are eligible to vote in today's election... 大约有一半人有资格参加今天的选举投票。 rein in = control 控制
主干识别:This prosperous community is the picture of the good and ever longer life
其他成分:What 做前面整个句子的同位语;同时做后面句子中have 的宾语; when they say that raising the eligibility age for Social Security and Medicare is a fair way to rein in the nation’s troublesome debt.状语从句;同时有一个that 引导的宾语从句
参考译文: 这样一种繁荣的社区正是高质量和更长寿生活的写照。决策者们认为提高享受社保和医保的资格年龄会是控制国家糟糕的债务状况的正当之道,那时他们脑海中有的也正是这样一幅图画。
(24)While warnings are often appropriate and necessary--the dangers of drug interactions, for example--and many are required by state or federal regulations, it isn’t clear that they actually protect the manufacturers and sellers from liability if a customer is injured. 词汇突破:appropriate:恰当的、合适的
liability:责任(duty,obligation, commitment的同义替换词)
主干识别: it isn’t clear that +主语从句(it 为形式主语)
其他成分: while warnings are often appropriate and necessary and many are required by state or federal regulations. 让步状语从句 the dangers of drug interactions, for example.插入语
that they actually protect the manufacturers and sellers from liability:宾语从句。 if a customer is injured:条件状语从句
微观解析:由while引导的时间状语从句中,大的并列可还原为while warnings are often…and many warnings are required…
译文赏析:尽管警告常常是适当而且必须的--比如对于药物相互作用的危险提出警告--许多警告还是按州或联邦政府规定要求给出的,然而(我们) 并不清楚,如果顾客受到伤害时,这些警告其实是在使其生产者和销售者豁免责任。
如果说某事是 a long shot, 意思是实现此事的机会不大。
I'm looking for a first edition of Alice in Wonderland for my mother's birthday. I know it's a long shot, but do you have one in stock? My favourite football team is in the cup final at the weekend. I think we could win, but it’s a long shot. We could ask the company to replace your broken smart phone for free. It's a long shot, but it's worth trying.
(25)The railroad industry as a whole, despite its brightening fortuning fortunes, still does not earn enough to cover the cost of the capital it must invest to keep up with its surging traffic. 词汇突破:fortuning:可观的(由fortune变化而来)
Fortune 财富,未来
Surging:汹涌澎湃的。但是在句子中是表示迅速发展的 Traffic 运量 ( 在用于网络的描述时表示:流量)
Cover 可以表达的意思很丰富。
例如(1)a horse one day can cover 14 miles.(表示走过的距离)
(2)100 dollars could cover my monthly spending. (表示需要的金钱)
等,还可以表示“报道的意思”
主干识别:the railroad industry does not earn enough
其他成分:as a whole 定语; despite its brightening fortuning fortunes 插入语(这里的despite可以换为in spite of);it must invest 定语从句 (这里省略了that); to cover the cost of the capital it must invest to keep up with its surging traffic. 表目的的不定式
微观解析:the capital it must invest to keep up with its surging traffic. it must invest 为省略了that 的定语从句
to keep up with its traffic 为定语修饰 capital
句中较长的插入语可以转化为让步状语从句:though it owns brightening fortuning fortunes。
译文赏析:就铁路工业整体而言,尽管拥有大好形势,但它的收入仍旧不可以与资本的消耗相平衡,而这些资本则是为了满足庞大的交通体系而必须的。(多个后置定语出现时可以用前置和拆分的方法分别处理)
Our business has suffered not a little through the war. 主谓:
The effect upon our business of the war has been striking. 主系表
The war has affected our business to remarkable extent. 主谓宾
The war has done our business much harm. 主谓宾1宾2
The war has rendered our business dull. 主 谓宾 宾补
(26)They gather all the data they can, not just performance statistics and biographical details but also the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers.
词汇突破:statistics数据;Achievers获得成功的人
(写作过程中可以使用固定词伙:statistics and details)
主干识别:They gather all the data. 主谓宾结构。
其他成分: they can的完整表达为:that they can gather ,出于简洁的考虑省掉了that 和gather; not just performance statistics and biographical details but also the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers 整个部分是data 的同位语
微观解析:同位语中第一部分是performance statistics and biographical details第二个部分为:the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers.其中with high achievers为定语修饰experiments. 译文赏析:他们尽其所能收集了一切数据,这些数据不仅包括表现数据和生物信息,而且也包括了那些表现优异者在实验室中所取得的实验结果。
(27)The examples of Virtual Vineyards,Amazon.com, and other pioneers show that a Web site selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security will attract online customers.
词汇突破:interactivity互动性;Hospitality 友好性;Security 安全性 主干识别:The examples show that…+宾语从句;主谓宾结构
其他成分:of Virtual Vineyards, Amazon.com, and other pioneers做example的同位语,我们把其看做为:A of B 的结构,A为上义词,B 为下义词;这样在翻译的处理中我们不需要生硬的翻译为…的例子 ;a Website selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security will attract online customers.宾语从句
微观解析: selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security现在分词短语修饰a website; 宾语从句主干为:a Website will attract online customers.
译文赏析:像Virtual Vineyards,Amazon.com这样的先驱网站表明,一个将交互性、服务性和安全性合理结合,且销售正确产品的网站是可以吸引来网上客户的。(宾语从句单独成句; 在翻译example of…的时候翻译为像…)
(28)A financial vehicle that saw the euro zone take most risk through equity, other governments a bit more through subordinated debt and private-sector investors the least through senior debt is still a long shot.
词汇突破: A financial vehicle 融资工具和融资方式
Equity 权益 ;subordinated debt 次级贷; senior debt 优先款 a long shot : 很少机会成功的尝试(注意:不要用字典的解释去用到翻译
中,一定要根据语境来决定具体的表达。
Reaching our sales goal this quarter is along shot because of the economy. 由于经济原因,本季度我们不太可能完成销售目标. 主干识别:A financial vehicle is still a long shot.
其他成分:that saw the euro zone take most risk through equity, other governments a bit more through subordinated debt and private-sector investors the least through senior debt定语从句,that=financial vehicle 在翻译的时候一定单独成句。
翻译点拨:financial vehicle 不可能发出saw 的动作,所以不能翻译为:融资方式看见。其实就是指:融资方式是什么样子的;the euro zone take most risk through equity, 后面是并列引起的省略补全后是:other governments take a bit more through subordinated debt andprivate-sector investors take the least through senior debt is still a long shot.翻译出来是:欧元区通过普通股票吸收最多的风险,其他政府通过次级贷吸收稍多的风险,而私有行业的投资者则通过优先债吸收最少的风险。(翻译的时候注意调整语序)
参考译文:欧元区通过普通股票吸收最多的风险,其他政府通过次级贷吸收稍多的风险,而私有行业的投资者则通过优先债吸收最少的风险,这种融资模式依然是不太可能实现的。
(29)But everybody knows Obama needs a liberal to stop the court from moving further to the right than it already has under John Roberts, the present chief justice, a man more stealth-bomber than aircraft-carrier, whose professions of judicial modesty during his own confirmation hearings in 2005 gave little inkling of the controversial decisions over which he has since presided.
词汇突破:liberal 自由主义者;Chief justice 大法官 Stealth-bomber 隐形轰炸机;Aircraft-carrier 航空母舰