The passion that is originated from curiosity
from: 源于，来自于
The culture from the west the western culture
on/upon: 关于
Remarks on the importance of literature works are varied within different historical periods. d. 动作的名词化表达
If children spend much time in watching television, it will do some harm to their physical health.
If parents do too much to manage their children’s lives, their children will ultimately lose the independence and competence.
Too much exposure to television programs will somehow do harm to children’s health. Parents’ over involvement in /interference with their children’s business will ultimately result in the loss of their children’s independence and competence.
五. 四级考试的得分要点
1. 看上去像一篇标准的四级写作——－字数满足要求120/150/180)，作文有身材，字迹清晰整齐（第一印象不差，不至于跌破底线） 三段式——小大小结构 一段见 关键词
二段见 逻辑（firstly, secondly…) 三段 见语言
2. 可以利用模板，但不要照搬模板，因为给分是global scoring (改卷老师认识什么是模板什么是你自己的语言，用模板不会得0分，不用也不一定会得高分，理性使用模板) 3. 四级写作就是高考写作的升级版，也就是词汇和语法能够有合格高中毕业生的水平即
可，不同点在于，翻译被自我构思取代。
六. 四级写作攻略 1.
破题的方法和思路的建立
破题－－ a. b. c.
破题——确定论证的思路——转化思路，避重就轻——避论证和语言难点，讲通识／普适道理
首段：谈现象（模板和关键词）
中间段落：析原因／利／弊（万能句式，逻辑，词汇的选择）
结尾段落：给结果／建议／观点（常用的建议和结果类词汇，漂亮的词汇，观点／总结） xinxiwencet4@126.com 密码：zhouxiangxiang 2 开头段的写法 谈现象，不给观点 hook + phenomenon 方法：hook=background
1）写“重要性，严重性，普遍性”－－－升级版：加时间，地点，人群，条件 句子公式：时间/条件+三性+范围/人群
时间：nowadays, recently, presently, in current days, over the past few decades, in the contemporary time.
范围：in students’ life, in people’s lives, in our neighborhood, in our modern life, in such a highly-commercialized society. (computerized, cyberized)
人群：among university students, among the youth, among modern people, among
确定关键词（即讨论对象）
确定文章结构（即三段的重点讨论内容和方向） 确定模板
different generations，post-eighties
条件：with the fast progress in technology, with the improvement of people’s living standard, with the speedy pace of modern life, with the increasing population and settlement.
条件/时间＋关键词定性分析＋人群/范围 各种性：
重要性：...is fairly essential/critical/significant/fatal...
...matters most/makes a huge difference when compared with other stuff. ...plays a leading/pressing role....
必要性：...is fairly necessary/rudimentary/fundamental/imperative... it is highly imperative that ..should do...(事件，写主谓句） there is great need/necessity to ....
普遍性：...is fairly familiar/common/prevailing/prevalent.... ...is about and around for a long time... ...has been penetrating into all walks of life. ...exists everywhere.
严重性：... is fairly severe, serious, grave, staid; sample:
With the improvement of people’s living standard, television and movie have been penetrating into all walks of life.
In the recent years, television and movie play an increasingly leading role in people’s lives/in people’s entertainment lives.
第二句话：
It is an interesting phenomenon that people in growing numbers are discussing／voicing their opinions on .(提纲内容的第一部分）.. 名词形式的宾语／动名词
It is of great interest to notice that people in growing numbers are voicing their different/divergent opinions on this hot issue.
Plus， there exists/emerges a trend that people in large population are paying/giving/pouring more attention to this issue of…名词形式的宾语／动名词
开头终极升级版：
时间/条件+重要性/必要性/严重性/流行性+范围/人群。+ For example/To be specific/To take another look, ….paraphrased version…（换句型，把主语写细，换动词） 换句型： 主系表换主谓宾 主动换被动
简单句换主从句（If, when, while, as long as, because） 主语的细致化：
尽量回避使用people, the society, we, you之类的名词和代词做主语。 动词的替换：
同意积累，短语和单独动词交替使用 Spoil: pour too much love over sb
Try: make great efforts to do, spare no efforts to do
In current years, free admission to museums is excessively prevailing both at home
and abroad. And it is interesting to notice that people in expanding numbers are voicing their opinions/expressing their concerns upon this issue. 35
Over the past few decades, free admission to museums has been exceedingly prevailing both at home and abroad. To be specific, visitors of different nationalities are charged free when they intend to enjoy the art or history displayed in museums. (39) Many young people can not go abroad to study is attributed to they have no money. 三性两限制 十句换表达 替换升级版
2）谈普适“公理”（重要性，普遍性，必要性等） hook:
As is well known/noted to all, ....
It is deeply rooted/deeply ingrained that... It is widely-accepted/widely-acknowledged that....
There is no denying the faca that... /There is no doubt that ...
Phenomenon
And recently, it is an interesting phenomenon that people in growing numbers are discussing about...
And it is of great interest to notice that people in growing numbers are voicing their different/divergent opinions on this issue.
Plus， there exists a trend that people in large population are paying more attention to this issue.
开头段落套写 微博重要性
微博：miniblog, weibo, twitter
It is widely-acknowledged that miniblog, namely weibo, has been gaining great popularity