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中间部分的完整部分套写: weibo, 社交网络流行原因的分析:
Without a shadow of doubt, it is not challenging or complicated to figure out that some essential factors are responsible for the popularity of “weibo” discussed above. Initially, a multitude of users are able to afford the cost on surfing online through their smart phones or personal computers, because they are much better off than people in the past. Plus, the technological innovation in digital and cyber field cultivates consumers’ habits in using weibo or other social networks. 77
4 结尾段落 做结论 A.
好:In a nutshell/To sum up/To draw a conclusion,..话题对象is
exceedingly/extraordinarily/particularly beneficial to both the society and people/environment/education. be beneficial both individually and collectively
be beneficial: make good contribution to; bring about benefits to..., lend great benefits to…, be of great benefits, be of great value, be of great interests. 举例:博物馆免费
In a nutshell, free admission to museums is exceedingly beneficial to both the personal intellectual level and the overall/mutual cultural communication. 21
In a nutshell, free admission to museums is of great value both individually and collectively. 15
In a nutshell, free admission to museums has made great contribution, both individually and collectively. 15
坏: To sum up, it is detrimental to..do../.主题..is exceedingly detrimental to ..sth/对象. + 同义替换
detrimental: make bad contribution to
lend great drawbacks/flaws to
be detrimental to something: be to the detriment of something 举例:使用一次性塑料袋
In a nutshell, too much use of disposable plastic bags is exceedingly detrimental to the environmental protection/conservation. It will make bad contribution to the sustainable environmental development. 27
不好不坏: In a word, no one/hardly anyone can make a clear judgment in the potential/imminent/upcoming/existent impact of ..主题..Therefore, ..主题.is really a double-edged sword.
举例:限制购买私家车
In a nutshell, hardly anyone can make a clear judgment in the potential impact of restricting the personal purchase of private cars. Therefore, to restrict the number of buying private cars is really/virtually/basically a double-edged sword. 36 B.给建议
Concerning this situation, some prudent measures are supposed to be available and practical./valid and valuable./effective and efficient . … 建议实施的主体 is/are suggested doing .具体建议的动作...
Prudent: careful, well-considered
Measures: strategies, approaches, means
Concerning the restriction on buying the private cars Concerning the specific circumstances, …suggest that …should … …suggest that …do/does/is/are… …suggest sb doing something
简约版:
Respecting this situation, it is highly imperative that ..实施主体. should do..实施动作.
建议类对象和动词:
主体对象:government and mass media 当局 authorities
政府机构 government agencies/divisions concerned 各级政府 governments at different levels
媒体行业 media industry 媒体炒作 media hype 媒体机构 media organization 新闻制作单位 news agencies 狗仔队paparazzi
动作:monitor, supervise, uncover, regulate, give an
objective/just/exaggerated/sensationalized/dramatized account of 督,管
make an effective supervision make an effective regulation give an objective/just…account/ coverage
The government agencies and media organization are suggested making the most effective/satisfying/satisfactory/efficient regulation and supervision.
The news agencies should assume their responsibilities to give all the citizens an objective and just coverage of what is happening around.
主体对象:
民众:the general public, citizen, netizen, grassroot, shitizen
动作: increase their awareness of ...;avoid insensitivity of ...;actively participate in....
公共利益 public interests/benefits/welfare 公共活动 community service, public activity 公益活动 charitable activities
举例:一次性塑料袋
Concerning this situation/In order to make the situation better, some prudent measures are supposed to be valid and valuable. Government agencies should regulate the retail and wholesale of disposable plastic bags. Meanwhile, it is highly imperative that the general public should increase their awareness of environmental conservation. 47
可替换的“建议类”句型:
Somebody/something is/are suggested doing something Eg:
News agencies are suggested supervising the effectiveness of the government’s polies. The citizens are suggested increasing their awareness of environmental protection. It is highly suggested that…should…
Eg: It is highly suggested that university students should increase their awareness of exposing themselves to the foreign culture. It is appropriate that …should…
The most proper remedy to this problem is that …should…
The most proper remedy to this problem is that university students should increase their awareness of exposing themselves to the foreign culture. There is a shared proposal that ….should…
二三段的逻辑衔接: 原因+建议/解决方案 影响+好坏定论
开头:点题/引入--引 两种方法:三性定义法 三性定义法加强版
中间:展开——放