不恰当内容 黄色内容 在线游戏 社交圈 接触
校园暴力
improper material porn
online games/adventures social network campus violence expose
psychological consultation bodies Mass media
government authorities supervision contributions recognition
sense of authoritativeness
心理辅导机构 大众媒体 政府部门 监督 贡献 认可
6. 国际国家类10% 贪污腐败 过度依赖 共同挑战 国际争端 战争问题 全球变暖 贫富差距 共同发展 国际贸易 跨国公司 文化交流 自然灾害 地震海啸 人性
权威感
abuse/ corruption of money overdependence common challenges
international disputes/conflicts global financial crisis warfare global warming
the gap between the rich and the poor (wealthy and in poverty common development international trade transnational corporate cultural exchanges natural disasters earthquake and tsunami humanity/ human nature and Cultures)
全球金融危机
联合国教科文组织 UNESCO (United Nations Organization of Education, Science
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少数民族语言 濒临灭绝 世界语 广泛认可 利益冲突 信仰差异 国际紧张 恐怖主义绑架 维和部队 经济膨胀 老龄化
ethnic minorities’ languages at the brink of extinction Esperanto wide acceptance the conflicts over profits religious differences international tension
terrorist abduction/kidnapping peace keeping force economic boom ageing population population
国家人口比例失调 The imbalanced mix of different age groups in a nation’s 福利制度 潜在威胁 前提
国防,国内治安 人民小康 可持续发展 长远战略眼光
welfare system prospective downsides
premix/ preconditions/ prerequisite national defense and domestic security well-being people sustainable development
far-sighted strategic vision of development
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大作文单边论现象题句型,思路及范文
常见题型
? 2008-11-08 More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable
clothes. Why is it? What are the positive and negative effects does this trend impose on the society?
? 2009-07-25 Nowadays, sending children to boarding school is becoming
increasingly popular. What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development?
? 2010-02-27Technological progress in the last century had negative effect,
despite its remarkable contribution to human society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本章节开始讲述5大类IELTS作文类别,将按照 1常用句型,2例题思路分析+范文,3考官范文 这个顺序进行讲授
常用句型
1. 随着…,最近有个现象…
? With the … of …, recently there is a trend/ development/popular practice
that…
2. 我认为这个趋势总体是好的,从…方面/以下几个方面来讲。
? I believe the trend generally positive in terms of …/ concerning the following
aspects.
3. …可以从中直接受益
? … can immediately benefit from …. 4. A对B在一定程度上有好处。
? A has positive effects on B to some extent.
? A can help/ positively contribute to B in certain measure.
? A is good/ favorable/ useful/ helpful/ beneficial to B on certain scale. ? B can be promoted/ enhanced/ improved/ strengthened…
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5. 具体来讲; 进一步来讲
? To be specific/ exact; Furthermore/ to further consider this issue/ thus 6. 另外
? In addition/ moreover/ what more/ an additional example is that 7. 换句话说
? In other words/ by that I mean/ put another way/ what is meant by that is
that…
8. 有充分的证据证明这一点
? There is enough evidence in …/ There seems to be many research findings to
confirm this.
9. 但是,存在一个相反的看法/ 负面影响/ 可能的风险/ 普遍的担心。
? However,there is an opposite view/ a downside/ a potential risk/ a
widespread concern. 10. 但是这个说法忽视了重要的因素
? However,this view fails to see important factors.
11. 幸运的是,这些问题正在/可以得到解决,因为/只要…采取措施比如… ? Fortunately, the problems in concern are being/ can be solved, because/ as
long as … take measures such as…. 12. … 有一些好处
? There are some advantages/ benefits of the development that …/ to doing… 13. 另一方面,…也有一些坏处
? On the other hand, there are some disadvantages/ drawbacks of the
development/ to doing ….
14. 因此,结论是这个趋势的好处抵消多余坏处。然而,…
? Therefore,it is concluded that the benefits of the trend can offset and exceed
the drawbacks. However,…
将以下面这道题目为例
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? 2008-11-08 More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable
clothes. Why is it? What are the positive and negative effects does this trend impose on the society?
中文思路
1. 我认为这个现象整体上是好的,从消费者,经济发展和生活水平的提高几个方面来讲。
2. 消费者直接受益。A.爽了尤其是被夸的时候。B.约会,开派对。吸引。 3. 另外,经济发展的到一定促进。消费增长,相关行业发展,就业。好的循环。但是,有些人持相反看法。
4. 反对者认为/有评论说(对方观点)时尚是奢侈,费钱。
但是,这个观点忽视了重要的因素。A.生活水平高了。B.物质资源丰富了 5. 总而言之,好抵消而且多余坏。
英文范文
Recently, there is a phenomenon that a growing/rising/increasing number of citizens like buying and wearing fashionable clothes. I believe the development/trend/tendency generally positive in terms of/ with respect to/ concerning consumers, the economy and the improved living conditions.
Consumers can immediately benefit from the development. There is enough evidence in our daily life. First, average citizens tend to feel very good when they are wearing fashionable clothes, especially when they are being flattered. (especially when they are being told ‘you look so nice in the dress’.) Secondly, to wear fashionable clothes can help a person be more attractive and confident, in some special occasions such as dating and parties.
In addition/ Besides, the economy can be promoted to some extent. To be specific, the increase in people’s consumption bring about/ give rise to the development of relevant businesses such as advertising companies, shopping malls and fashion design, where many job opportunities are offered. This is a sound/positive economic circulation. Nevertheless, some people hold opposite views on this
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