issue.
Opponents believe/ Critics say/ Some people take it for granted that fashion is luxurious, because it takes much money and the money can be used for more important purposes like investment in education. However, this view fails to see some factors/aspects of importance. First and foremost, thanks to the improved living standards, most citizens in big cities can afford going after fashion. Moreover, we can buy fashionable clothes without spending much with the increase in resources.
In conclusion, the benefits of the phenomenon offset and exceed the drawbacks.
接下来看一看考官范文，该范文来自Road to IELTS May 2010雅思官方网络培训 Cultural heritage should be developed into tourist attractions?
今天在很多国家，文化旅游业收到欢迎鼓励，在这种情况下文化旅游业同时被是为是展示国家宝藏和成果的机会，以及工作和收入来源。然而，尽管有这些好处，这也对被参观的景点造成严重的问题。
Nowadays, cultural tourism is welcomed and encouraged in many countries, where it is seen both as an opportunity to display national treasures and achievements to visitors, and also as a source of income and jobs. However, in spite of these benefits, it can also pose severe problems for the specific sites which are visited.
文化旅游业对于景点本身有各种好处。尤其是，他们可能从上升的成本中受益，部分可能被花掉，比如说花在改善博物馆和艺术馆以及更加频繁和更大规模的展览。 There are various advantages of cultural tourism for the site themselves. In particular, they may benefit from greatly increased income, part of which may be spent, for example, on improving museums and galleries and on more frequent and more ambitious exhibitions.
尽管这些最初可能是设计来吸引旅游者的，但是当地旅游者也可以享受到。进一步的好处是当地政府会意识到这些景点的价值，并且投资。结果，纪念地和历史性建筑得到重修和保护。最后，参观者了解了这个国家，因此其文化习俗被旅游者和当地人更好的理解欣赏。结果，他们发扬光大。
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Although these may be designed primarily to attract tourists, they are also available for local people to enjoy. A further advantage is that local authorities recognize the value of their sites, which they then invest money in. As a result, monuments and historical buildings are restored and protected. Finally, visitors learn about the country, whose culture and customs are consequently understood and appreciated better by both tourists and local people. As a result, they flourish. 另一方面，文化旅游业有些坏处。主要是，尽管采取了保护措施，大量观光者还是可能对于某些景点比如说古代的庙宇和洞穴画造成严重破坏。这可能意味着民族遗产的一个重要部分丢失了。进一步来讲，在一个纪念地用来为当地经济产生收入的区域这个景点可能被周围的丑陋旅馆和其他的旅游设施破坏。最后如果太多人去一个景点，这个地方可能失去其在当地社区的文化意义。尤其如此，对于那些宗教社会意义占了社区生活核心部分的纪念地来说。
On the other hand, cultural tourism has a number of drawbacks. The main one is that, despite protective measures being taken, the sheer number of visitors can cause serious damage to monuments such as ancient temples or cave paintings. This may mean that an important part of a country’s national heritage is lost. Furthermore, in a region where the monuments are expected to generate income for the local economy, the site may be spoilt by being surrounded by ugly hotels and other tourist facilities. Finally, if too many tourists visit a site, it may lose its cultural significance within the local community. This is particularly the case for monuments whose religious and social importance makes them a central part of community life.
总之，文化旅游总体是好事，它带来的问题只有通过合理的计划和足够的投资用于保护维护参观景点的办法才能得到避免。另外，尽管文化旅游总体不能限制，但是去某些景点的旅游者的人数应该限制，应该教育旅游者尊重文化景点。
On the whole, while cultural tourism is generally beneficial, the problem which it causes can only be avoided with proper planning and sufficient investment in the protection and preservation of the sites which tourists visit. In addition, although cultural tourism in general should not be discouraged, the number of tourists visiting certain sites should be restricted and tourists should be educated to respect them.
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张老师对于考官范文分析：
虽然是问‘should…?’但是其实该题的核心内容是 ‘cultural tourism’的benefits VS drawbacks. 很明显考官最终的答案和我们讲的不谋而合，因为cultural tourism根据事实正在发生，而且growing, 考官单纯对比了‘好’和‘坏’之后，得出了‘支持发展cultural tourism 得答案，并且提出了避免drawbacks的办法。 更多练习题见附件2
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大作文单边论观点题句型，思路及范文
常见题型
? 2008-08-16 Some people think the media should not report details of
crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ? 2009-11-21Individuals and countries can not help everyone who
need help in the world, so we should be only concerned about our own communities and countries. Agree or Disagree?
? 2010-02-06Air travel only brings advantages to the rich people. But
the majority of people do not benefit from it. To what extent do you agree?
常用句型
1. 有人建议…. 我不完全同意该观点。/我倾向于不同意这个观点
? It is sometime suggested that …. I do not believe this view completely right. /I
tend to disagree with this view. 2. 不得不承认该观点有一定的道理。
? It has to be admitted that…/Surely, this view makes sense in some way. 3. 但是，得到…结论不见得意味着…. 主要原因是…
? However, reaching the conclusion that … does not necessarily lead to the
assumption that….
4. 支持者的可能会说…. 他们进一步认为…
? Opponents might believe that …. They may further argue that…. 5. 那些持反对意见的人可能主要考虑到…. 而且，一种广泛的看法是….
? Those who find the practice/statement unjustified would mainly consider
that …. Moreover, it is also widely believed that …. 6. 有一些支持这个观点的论证。
? There are some arguments in support/favor of this view. 7. 另一方面，有一些强有力的论证是反对这个做法的。
? On the other hand, there are strong arguments against this view/practice. 8. 很多人/还有人认为…
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? It is often/also said that… 9. 事实已经证明… ? It has been found that… 10. 问题/真正的办法不是…，而是…
? The issue/ the real solution should not be …, but …. 11. 真相只有一个…
? The truth, therefore, is closer to the fact that…
实例分析
剑桥6第一篇（7.5分：结构，思路，例子兼备；衔接不够好；词汇好；复杂句好但是有小错误）
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
思路分析（中文提纲）
1． 用‘明星做广告促使人们买他们可能不想要的东西’的例子引入观点。 2． 支持者有以下看法: 广告美化产品，可能人们一冲动就买了；有人看别人买了自己也冲动了。
3． 反对者认为: 人们有自己的选择权，因此没人可以真正判断，消费者是不是真的需要；而且大多数人的可用收入是有限的，不太可能瞎买
4． 我认为。。。/进一步来说。。。真正的办法不是禁止，而是规范广告行业，by governments. 通过更多办法保护消费者，比如中国315。 范文
Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boasts the sales of good and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This argument may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favorite singers advertise, although they do not really need the products.
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