六级写作讲义(2)

2019-01-19 16:40

科技(数字化产品,盗版,科学技术发展,博客/微博) 社会问题(西方节目,出境旅游,房产权,伪劣商品,不良商业广告,燃放鞭炮)neighborhood

永恒性话题/精神类/品质类(大学生心理健康,做好事,诚实,关于拒绝,机会,幸福,成功,奉献,勇气) 莫名其妙话题(名字的重要性) B 话题规律

1 和学生相关的话题考的频率最高

2 社会话题一定避开热点或过于政治性的命题 3 永恒性话题需要注意备考

4 莫名其妙的话题就听天由命,词汇用好就好 三: 六级考试的得分要点

A 看上去像一篇标准的六级写作——-字数满足要求150/180/240,作文有身材,字迹清晰整齐(第一印象不差,不至于跌破底线)

三段式——小大小结构 一段见 关键词

二段见 逻辑(firstly, secondly?) 三段 见语言,点题/呼应

B 可以利用模板,但不要照搬模板,因为给分是global scoring (改卷老师认识什么是模板什么是你自己的语言,用模板不会得0分,不用也不一定会得高分,理性使用模板)

C 六级写作和四级写作的区别——语言!!!只有语言!!!还是语言!!!——什么是语言?用词准确,句式多变,逻辑衔接清晰自然就是好的语言!!!无视内容的高深和观点的犀利,不需要!!!真心不需要,只要合理即可!!!!

四 六级写作攻略 1. 逻辑衔接用法

2. 破题的方法和思路的建立

破题——先破形式,再确定论证的思路——转化思路,避重就轻——避论证和语言难点,讲通识/普适道理

首段:谈现象(模板,句式的替换,关键词,思路)

中间段落:析原因/利/弊(万能句式,逻辑,思路和素材,词汇的选择)

结尾段落:给结果/建议(常用的建议和结果类以及支持反对类的词汇,漂亮的句型,观点/总结) 2 开头段的写法 谈现象,不给观点 hook + phenomenon 方法:

a 重要性,严重性,普遍性(essential, critical, deeply-rooted, deeply-ingrained, widely-accepted,

严重:aggravate its seriousness, ?is so serious that ?has drawn much attention and even dispute from ?) ----教育,精神/品质

“三性模板”----It is deeply-ingrained that ?.is

exceedingly essential in ?’s life, especially in?’s. Everyone, me included, has no way/outlet to avoid or ignore it. If required to voice my own opinion on the reason/result/suggestion/influence/effect of ?, I

firmly/clearly will elaborate on my argument as follows. I will put forward my elaborate argument as follows. 写观点的句子:

To put it more simply, I would like to state my opinion as ?..

To be specific, I would rather state my view as?

Demo of issue topic in 2008

It is deeply ingrained that the mental health is

exceedingly essential in a person’s life, especially in university students’. Everyone, me included, has no way to avoid or ignore its importance/the importance of mental hygiene . If asked to voice my own opinion/put forward/set forth on the suggestions for university students keeping mentally healthy, I clearly will elaborate my argument as follows. 词汇补充

重要的:earthshaking, eventful, momentous, weighty, tectonic, historic, monumental,

不重要的:insignificant, negligible, trifling, trivial, unimportant;

严重的:serious, severe, grave, sedate, staid, rock-ribbed;

普遍的:pervasive, universal, prevailing, prevalent, customary, conventional

b 争论性(争论内容,争论态度,争论方法,attitude and approach, controversial, divergent, disputable)—社会话题/social issues, 科技话题

Undoubtedly, ?has entered/penetrated/influenced people’s lives/all walks of life and aroused much attention among the general public as well as the government divisions.

Actually/unfortunately, it is disputable to reach an

agreement/concord on the issue of/whether?., because this issue involves many different/complicated factors./because this issue is a matter of opinions. /because people at different stands hold differently. As for me, the argument on this issue will be elaborated as follows. Should China support more ownership of private cars? Undoubtedly, private cars have entered common people’s lives and aroused much discussion among the general public and government division. Unfortunately, it is fairly disputable to reach an agreement on whether

people/consumers should be encouraged or restrained to buy private cars, because this issue involves many complicated factors. 利弊

c 衔接第一段和第二段(probe into the reasons/involving factors/benefits/drawbacks/effects/consequence)

When probing into/scrutinizing/analyzing the reasons/result/benefits/drawbacks/merits/demerits for/of the issue of /phenomenon that…., people, especially students, may have their own/personal viewpoint, attitude, and way of behavior. For my own part/From my personal perspective, this issue, (which is being discussed/disputed/argued/debated in a public forum/in some popular public media like social networking,) can be perceived as follows/in the following facets..

When probing into the reasons for the popularity of miniblogs, …. When probing into the reasons why disposable plastic bags are limited to use,

When probing into the results of the phenomenon that

Demo:

When probing into the reasons for students’ preference of going to graduate school or to work directly, people, me included, will have their own attitude, viewpoint, and way of behavior. For my own part, this issue should be perceived in the following facets.

d 对比法 (while, admittedly, concededly, whereas)

Admittedly, it is a deeply-rooted opinion that?.

Unfortunately, I, personally, hold a thoroughly divergent point that?. The reason why I state in this way can be elaborated as follows.

数据类的开头 必用词汇:

increase, decrease, rise up, decline, slump, rocket, fluctuate, remain constant. dramatically, drastically, steadily, slightly.

?year/The past decade has/had witnessed a trend/tendency that?上升/下降/波动/持平? 1 点题

As shown/indicated/portrayed/illustrated in the graph, ?..趋势/特点.

2 When/After analyzing the figures/statistics offered here, we can easily find that?

3 Actually, this graph aims to call people’s attention to the issue of?.

3 中间论证的写法


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