六级写作讲义(5)

2019-01-19 16:40

It is human instinct to pursue happiness and success throughout their lives. On human nature

写需求: to pursue the ?is one of human’s fundamental

needs/rudimentary needs. (Physiological 需求,安全需求,情感需求,尊严需求,自我实现需求) Maslow 写方法:

There are millions of ways to achieve success and happiness. All roads lead to Rome.

The successful pursuit of happiness can be achieved by applying different strategies.

写实例: the story of ?is the best manifesto of the value of pursuing?

Naturally, the issue of the

value/significance/ways/methods/means/approaches/techniques /skills/attitude of/to ?is a fairly worthwhile and

essential matter for all human beings/races, no matter what race or color/what race, color or party they are in. (Every individual, when confronted with this issue, has his own way to figure it out.) To be brief/frank, the pursuit of ?.is one of human natures. For example, ?Meanwhile, humans’ desire/lust/craving/longing/hunger/thirst for needs at different levels can best demonstrate this issue. In details, ? Finally, if we put our eye to the reality/world, we may find that the story of?.. 追求:pursue, in pursuit of, chase after, run for, go in for

重视:value, cherish, highlight 实现:accomplish, achieve, culminate in

fulfill

奉献:sacrifice oneself to, contribute one’s own bit to 投入: dedicate oneself to, commit oneself to

个人价值:personal value; 集体价值:collective value; 社会凝聚力:social cohesion

幸福:happiness, well-being, welfare, bliss, merriness 目标:goal, target, aim

尊严:self-esteem;认可: recognition, acknowledgement; 尊重 respect, reverence; 安全感:sense of security.

成就/成绩:achievements, feats, exploits

积极的情感:positive feelings/sentiments/temperament like optimism, tolerance, empathy, honesty, responsibility. 消极的情感:negative feelings like pessimism, anxiety,

irritation, dishonesty, impiety, shift of responsibility. 本质来讲:people were born to? it is natural for people to ? it is one of human’s instincts to ?

奉献的意义(sacrifice, altruism, contribution, love) 对社会奉献:实现个人价值,促进社会凝聚力,滋养社会良好的风气。

Naturally, it is one of humans’ instincts to make personal sacrifice/contribution to the society. Because people, as members of the society, have the responsibility to

facilitate social cohesion, the positive air/climate will be cultivated/nurtured.

Tips:

1 contrasting ideas appearance VS abilities competition VS cooperation happiness VS success

2 In reality, there are countless/numerous

instances/models/examples/cases to demonstrate what I have analyzed/what I will analyze, no matter which field he belongs to and which business he is engaged in. And ?can be cited as the best role model./idol/hero. 作文如何自检:

1 句子结构错误(主谓一致,主从完整;主语+谓语动词单三一致关系Pollution is attributed to the abuse of natural

resources like coal and gasoline. 主语+谓语,谓语+其他 The governments at all levels overuse,abuse the public

resources. 主语名词或动名词+代词+谓语+其他 The abilities of employees, the managerial efficiency and investment strategies contribute to the success of a company.谓语动词-连词=1 ;主谓句,副词/介词词组,主谓句 The government has been abusing public resources for long,so the general public are complaining about governments’ policy. 主语+be +do/did

People are enjoyed by their happiness. The government is augments the commercial inputs.

2 时态:统一/一致(一般现在,现在进行,现在完成,现在完成进行,一般将来) 3 代词照应:it, you, people, they,one/he 4 副词形容词修饰

5 介词之后搭配,介词分为简单介词和复杂介词两种,一般的介词都

跟名词和动名词,不跟that从句或不带that的从句。

From 是一个特殊的介词,即它之后可以跟副词和介词词组。如 from across the globe, from abraod,. from upstairs等 I am fond of that you have married. I am fond of you have married.

4 结尾的写法 给结果:

Based on the reasons analyzed above, we can draw/anticipate/predict/preview some

palpable/distinct/overt/explicit/salient/arresting/conspicuous and immediate consequences. ?具体结果?

好结果:有益的, 积极的,繁荣的,可持续发展的,和谐的未来 beneficial, positive, prosperous, sustainable, harmonious prospect/effects/impacts can be seen ahead of us;/within everyone’s reach;/in everyone’s hand.

坏结果:有坏处的,消极的,落后的,过度消耗性的,破坏性的未来

detrimental, negative, laggard, backward, underdeveloped, overly-consumed/overly consumptive, destructive

prospect/effects/impacts can be within everyone’s reach/in everyone’s hand/seen ahead of us. Demo:

为什么越来越多的大学生选择出国留学?

Based upon the reasons analyzed above, we can anticipate a palpable and immediate consequence. Should university students further their academic studies abroad, a

beneficial and positive/promising prospect can be seen ahead of them.

Ps: should somebody do something= if somebody should do something

Should private cars be restricted to buy

Should consumers be restricted to buy private cars, Should university students be encouraged and even required to aid the education in the mountainous areas, Poverty-stricken, badly-off, well-off 给建议:

In order to/With the aim to/For the purpose to make the situation/things/atmosphere/settings better, some constructive/prudent/practical/applicable/valuable

suggestions/advice/proposals/recommendations/remedies/therapies can be put forward here.

Put forward: set forth; raise up; launch

Can be put forward: are worth mentioning and putting into force.

建议对象:政府 the government, the governments at all levels, the government divisions in authority

政府行为:给钱:提供资金/补贴和政策 offer adequate funding/subsidies/spendings and favorable policies

控:控制市场风险 regulate/manage/manipulate/put?under the


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